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Bare metal manual installation guide
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This section is a continuation of steps from the :ref:`bare-metal-install`
page.
This section contains the steps for a |CL| manual installation. It picks up
where the :ref:`bare-metal-install` left off:
Selecting the :guilabel:`< Manual(Advanced) >` menu option as seen in figure
1, you can do the following additional tasks during the |CL| Installer setup:
Select the :guilabel:`< Manual(Advanced) >` menu option as seen in figure
1, to do the following additional tasks during the |CL| Installer setup:
* :ref:`Modify the disk layout using the cgdisk utility<cgdisk-manual-install>`
* Add additional command-line parameters to the kernel
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https://clearLinux.org/features/telemetry
.. _`latest kernel's command-line parameters`:
https://www.kernel.org/doc/html/latest/admin-guide/kernel-parameters.html
https://www.kernel.org/doc/html/latest/admin-guide/kernel-parameters.html