From be1df8a364a61b8172f3b466b68dd7bb97fcde70 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Leavitt Date: Mon, 23 Oct 2017 15:05:59 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Update bare-metal-manual-install.rst Updates to the intro to this document to make it more readable as recommended by Rodrigo --- .../bare-metal-install/bare-metal-manual-install.rst | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/source/clear-linux/get-started/bare-metal-install/bare-metal-manual-install.rst b/source/clear-linux/get-started/bare-metal-install/bare-metal-manual-install.rst index 2435d651..c7ac4675 100644 --- a/source/clear-linux/get-started/bare-metal-install/bare-metal-manual-install.rst +++ b/source/clear-linux/get-started/bare-metal-install/bare-metal-manual-install.rst @@ -3,11 +3,11 @@ Bare metal manual installation guide #################################### -This section is a continuation of steps from the :ref:`bare-metal-install` -page. +This section contains the steps for a |CL| manual installation. It picks up +where the :ref:`bare-metal-install` left off: -Selecting the :guilabel:`< Manual(Advanced) >` menu option as seen in figure -1, you can do the following additional tasks during the |CL| Installer setup: +Select the :guilabel:`< Manual(Advanced) >` menu option as seen in figure +1, to do the following additional tasks during the |CL| Installer setup: * :ref:`Modify the disk layout using the cgdisk utility` * Add additional command-line parameters to the kernel @@ -281,4 +281,4 @@ system. https://clearLinux.org/features/telemetry .. _`latest kernel's command-line parameters`: - https://www.kernel.org/doc/html/latest/admin-guide/kernel-parameters.html \ No newline at end of file + https://www.kernel.org/doc/html/latest/admin-guide/kernel-parameters.html