diff --git a/source/clear-linux/get-started/bare-metal-install/bare-metal-manual-install.rst b/source/clear-linux/get-started/bare-metal-install/bare-metal-manual-install.rst
index 2435d651..c7ac4675 100644
--- a/source/clear-linux/get-started/bare-metal-install/bare-metal-manual-install.rst
+++ b/source/clear-linux/get-started/bare-metal-install/bare-metal-manual-install.rst
@@ -3,11 +3,11 @@
 Bare metal manual installation guide
 ####################################
 
-This section is a continuation of steps from the :ref:`bare-metal-install`
-page.
+This section contains the steps for a |CL| manual installation.  It picks up
+where the :ref:`bare-metal-install` left off:
 
-Selecting the :guilabel:`< Manual(Advanced) >` menu option as seen in figure
-1, you can do the following additional tasks during the |CL| Installer setup:
+Select the :guilabel:`< Manual(Advanced) >` menu option as seen in figure
+1, to do the following additional tasks during the |CL| Installer setup:
 
 * :ref:`Modify the disk layout using the cgdisk utility<cgdisk-manual-install>`
 * Add additional command-line parameters to the kernel
@@ -281,4 +281,4 @@ system.
    https://clearLinux.org/features/telemetry
 
 .. _`latest kernel's command-line parameters`:
-   https://www.kernel.org/doc/html/latest/admin-guide/kernel-parameters.html
\ No newline at end of file
+   https://www.kernel.org/doc/html/latest/admin-guide/kernel-parameters.html