Modified topic title, heading text, and heading levels.
Deleted prompt character. Replaced # with sudo.
Corrected links to external webpages.
Edited text for active voice and consistency between steps.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
Deleted prompt character. Replaced # with sudo.
Assigned bash role to code blocks with user entries.
Edited text for active voice and consistency between steps.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
The rewrite includes:
Explicit commands for important options.
Use of lists to improve the clarity of the configuration variables content.
Removal of command prompts to enable DBT.
Consistent use of terminology.
Use of concrete examples to improve the clarity of the commands.
Improved content flow and navigation with linked workflow overviews.
Added cross-references.
Removed ambiguous relative pronouns and punctuation.
Removed passive voice whenever possible.
Changed verbs to present tense for consistency and style guide compliance.
Optimized headings for search engines.
Signed-off-by: Rodrigo Caballero <rodrigo.caballero.abraham@intel.com>
Added |CLOSIA|, removed incorrect option roles, added envvar role,
removed XML language in code blocks, and minor text edits.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
This patch updates the documentation to comply with all of the new changes
Mixer 4.0 introduces:
- Many changes to the bundle lifecycle. It introduces
the concept of "local" and "upstream" bundles, and several new commands
to work with them.
- The new, native implementations of swupd-server
and the bundle-chroot-builder tool, both still in experimental
mode behind optional flags.
- New default values for mixer init
Signed-off-by: Kevin C. Wells <kevin.c.wells@intel.com>
* In the "preconf" doc -> Create and configure -> step 10, I changed "When you attach the pre-configured |CL| VMware image, VMWare removes the default virtual disk making this setting irrelevant" to "The disk settings do not matter at this stage because you will remove the default virtual disk and attach a pre-configured Clear Linux VMware image at a later step" because the former implies that VMware will do it automatically, but in fact, the user will manually remove the default virtual disk.
Signed-off-by: Bun K Tan <bun.k.tan@intel.com>
Drastically simplified the language used and fixed grammar, spelling,
and style issues.
Fixed the content flow. Particularly how the screenshots are handled.
By fixing how the screens were introduced, the steps could be simplified to
a single level. This change provides a much better experience for readers.
Signed-off-by: Rodrigo Caballero <rodrigo.caballero.abraham@intel.com>
- Changed the names of the images to follow naming convention.
- Re-used content from the "download-verify-uncompress" docs.
- General language fixes.
Signed-off-by: Bun K Tan <bun.k.tan@intel.com>
Signed-off-by: Bun K Tan <bktan1@bktan1-mac08.jf.intel.com>
This latest version of the VMware player improved document was merged with the latest main branch and will be in a different branch than the last pull request, which I will remove.
Updated with feedbacks from Ianeta.
Signed-off-by: Bun K Tan <bun.k.tan@intel.com>
Update
Signed-off-by: Bun K Tan <bun.k.tan@intel.com>
Updates...
Signed-off-by: Bun K Tan <bun.k.tan@intel.com>
1) Changed the title to "Run Clear Linux as a VMware Workstation Player guest OS". I think "Use VMware Player" is too generic.
These are changes based on Tom's feedback:
2) Added minimum disk size info.
3) Added minimum memory info and a screenshot.
4) Added file type info for .vmx file in Windows.
5) Added blurb on how to verify checksum for Windows.
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Signed-off-by: Bun K Tan <bun.k.tan@intel.com>
Corrected screenshot for figure #19.
Signed-off-by: Bun K Tan <bun.k.tan@intel.com>
>>> 2017-11-17
- Converted figures substitution to inline.
>>> 2017-11-21
1) Added brief intro to what VMware Workstation player is.
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Michael Vincerra