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Michael Vincerra 6ceebea52e Adds missing punctuation, preposition, and hyperlink.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-14 13:33:52 -08:00
Michael Vincerra c34f8a148b Revises :scale: from 50% to 100% on all figures.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-14 12:08:44 -08:00
Michael Vincerra 7ead9926de Corrects syntax error on note.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-14 12:07:47 -08:00
Michael Vincerra 79d967924a Applies editorial revisions:
- Corrects typo
- Revises all menus that represent the UI to Title Case.

Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-14 09:43:02 -08:00
Michael Vincerra c0e5ffa2db Revises live desktop beta image; consistency.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-13 18:03:05 -08:00
Michael Vincerra f4b275c480 Revises wording and header levels.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-13 18:02:19 -08:00
Michael Vincerra 549b9a5585 Revises intro para.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-13 18:01:34 -08:00
Michael Vincerra fc3fbda322 Removes as result of renaming figure filenames.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-13 12:13:02 -08:00
Michael Vincerra e64a2d5212 Revises figure filenames per guideline.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-13 12:12:07 -08:00
Michael Vincerra 9145b8ce52 Corrects paths in toctree; adds notes.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-13 12:10:26 -08:00
Michael Vincerra da942ec694 Omits TOC, replaces with targets; adds retrun link; revises final sect.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-13 12:07:54 -08:00
Michael Vincerra 950fa154ea Revises intro and figure filenames per guideline.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-13 12:05:50 -08:00
Michael Vincerra 0e54ac7da6 Revises all figure filenames and intro for brevity.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-13 11:23:08 -08:00
Michael Vincerra d2c9620079 Adds fullpath in toctree; revises line breaks per reviewer feedback.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-12 17:49:45 -08:00
Michael Vincerra 35e09fc2e4 Corrects syntax errors.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-12 17:49:14 -08:00
Michael Vincerra 5bc2cec874 Revises verbiage and label targets for consistency.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-12 17:48:28 -08:00
Michael Vincerra 4c202b66d3 Revises verbiage intro to "desktop image" per reviewer feedback.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-12 17:46:25 -08:00
Michael Vincerra 5c2f5e804f Renames Fig. 3 to Fig. 2; thus filename revision.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-12 12:54:08 -08:00
Michael Vincerra 47bc6a3dad Reduces to two images in install-beta-intro; image numbers revised.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-12 12:52:48 -08:00
Michael Vincerra dd693b5256 Adds link to "Try...live image install beta" document.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-12 12:51:02 -08:00
Michael Vincerra d419346adc Revises intro; adds final section, link to return to bare-metal-beta-intro.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-12 12:46:58 -08:00
Michael Vincerra 137d613a91 Revises intro and final section:
- Specify this is a continuation of bare-metal-install-beta-intro
- Incorporate feedback from UI review, Min. install req's
- Correct typo in required-options-installation target label

Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-12 12:42:11 -08:00
Michael Vincerra a081d9ed11 Adds section headers, TOC, and revises wording for clarity.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-12 12:18:22 -08:00
Michael Vincerra b79ceb24fb Revises title and intro.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-10 12:28:15 -08:00
Michael Vincerra 534514c83e Revises requirements section.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-10 11:36:55 -08:00
Michael Vincerra c9c36fb01c Simplifies Prereqs and revises content for specific beta use case.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-10 11:35:22 -08:00
Michael Vincerra a6fb705169 Revises intro for clarity and scales images to 50 percent.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-10 11:33:47 -08:00
Michael Vincerra 816df17a6d Create bare-metal-install-beta-intro landing page.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-09 18:45:26 -08:00
Michael Vincerra 7b75a68df9 Revise link: bare-metal-install-beta-intro
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-09 18:44:49 -08:00
Michael Vincerra aded6c6957 Adds bare-metal-install-beta based on tui instruction.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-09 18:01:52 -08:00
Michael Vincerra 66d1c7fb9a Create single page to create a bootable USB for your OS and:
- Include link to beta image (location TBD)
- Revise and simplify includes used to declutter

Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-09 17:58:20 -08:00
Michael Vincerra 4cb18f4643 Adds following for bare-metal-install-beta:
- Parent folder and child file: bare-metal-install-beta
- figures

Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-09 15:21:33 -08:00
Michael Vincerra 0cc215db84 Adds link to bare-metal-install-beta on get-started.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-09 15:20:08 -08:00
michael vincerra ba6f02b318 Merge pull request #310 from krisdale/kd-tutorials-substitution-update
Tutorials substitution update
2018-11-08 16:27:25 -08:00
michael vincerra 822a3b9e04 Merge pull request #311 from mvincerx/mv-edits-telemetry-guides
Telemetry guides editorial revisions.
2018-11-08 14:17:12 -08:00
Michael Vincerra 75ba97561e Adds new title as telemetry-z-api to telemetrics for toctree.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-08 14:10:45 -08:00
Michael Vincerra 35eeed664f Minor edits for clarity.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-08 14:02:00 -08:00
Michael Vincerra d5636371f6 Renames telemetry-api.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-08 13:44:31 -08:00
Michael Vincerra 56f9440936 Renames telemetry-api with a prefix of z so that it appears
last.

Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-08 13:43:28 -08:00
michael vincerra 214ad3890d Merge pull request #308 from krisdale/kd-reference-substitution-update
Update product name substitution in reference section
2018-11-08 10:54:10 -08:00
Kristal Dale 44fd806ade Update word in collab guide code section
Signed-off-by: Kristal Dale <kristal.dale@intel.com>
2018-11-08 10:29:34 -08:00
Michael Vincerra c8bdc52e44 Corrects syntax error and revises sentence for legibility.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-07 18:21:54 -08:00
Kristal Dale aa9fe2bd27 Clean up from merge conflict message.
Signed-off-by: Kristal Dale <kristal.dale@intel.com>
2018-11-07 15:31:25 -08:00
Kristal Dale 8de92f42d7 Replace CLOSIA substitutions in tutorials
- Clean up white space
- Replace CLOSIA substitutions with CL-ATTR
- Replace in line Clear Linux text with CL sub
- Update links to not include Clear Linux text in link text

Signed-off-by: Kristal Dale <kristal.dale@intel.com>
2018-11-07 15:24:51 -08:00
michael vincerra 4f288d0239 Merge pull request #276 from mvincerx/add-telemetry-guides
Adds telemetry.rst landing page and 5 new guides:
2018-11-06 17:09:41 -08:00
Michael Vincerra af933879ab Changes HEREDOC to lowercase :file:heredoc.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-06 16:19:45 -08:00
Michael Vincerra 1161f50adf Corrects syntax of argument after :end-before: for proper cross-ref.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-06 16:12:12 -08:00
Michael Vincerra e2c79d33cd Removes paths to former version of telemetry-enable.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-06 16:11:24 -08:00
Michael Vincerra b376c2c284 Corrects syntax in filename ref at top, adding ":" .
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-06 15:50:24 -08:00
Michael Vincerra 689fcc2cff Removes previous version of telemetry-enable in guides/.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-11-06 15:49:14 -08:00