Mahoney
d0de27112f
Signed-off-by: Mahoney <genessa.k.mahoney@intel.com>
2018-05-03 11:16:42 -07:00
Mahoney
d8cf6db3d8
Completed review feedback and incoporated changes.
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Signed-off-by: Mahoney <genessa.k.mahoney@intel.com >
2018-05-03 08:47:57 -07:00
Michael Vincerra
9e6833d1e0
Edits installation instructions for accuracy; corrects grammatical errors.
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- Corrects grammatical errors and simplifies instruction for various installation methods.
- Revises bare-metal-manual-install to correct errors and for readability.
- Revises cgdisk-manual-install; omits fig. 16, then directs user to bare-metal-manual-install.
- Revise virtualbox.rst, first two paragraphs for conciseness; omits prefixes to commands
- Revises instruction in Bundle Selector. Fixes Figure 15.
- Corrects erroneous link in first para to bare-metal-manual-install.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com >
2018-05-02 15:20:58 -07:00
Mahoney
786d7f3c25
Copy edits for enable a new user space
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Signed-off-by: Mahoney <genessa.k.mahoney@intel.com >
2018-05-01 09:36:47 -07:00
deb-intel
f89889e504
Grammar checks in telemetry-enable file
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Changed console to bash
Signed-off-by: deb-intel <38864784+deb-intel@users.noreply.github.com >
2018-05-01 09:20:56 -04:00
mltullis
64c4bd9908
Merge pull request #108 from MCamp859/multiboot-edits
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Split multi-boot doc into small files, updated fig refs.
2018-04-30 09:32:22 -07:00
mltullis
de18d0d24f
Merge pull request #122 from MCamp859/image-files-edit
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Copy edit of 4 interlinked files in Maint Guide.
2018-04-26 14:58:21 -07:00
mltullis
2250fd2005
Merge pull request #120 from MCamp859/incr-virt-disk-edits
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Edited increase-virtual-disk-size guide for grammar, formatting, and …
2018-04-26 14:56:43 -07:00
MCamp859
78d4e0720a
Incorporated review feedback.
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Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net >
2018-04-26 14:53:19 -04:00
MCamp859
65bdc30ad1
Copy edit of 4 interlinked files in Maint Guide.
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Files: image types; download verify uncompress for Linux, macOS, and Windows
Edits for branding and format. Removed $ prompts.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net >
2018-04-26 14:31:07 -04:00
MCamp859
22b3d76759
Created how-to-clear-overview as a summary of the How to Clear training.
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Updated Reference file and added training overview.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net >
2018-04-25 13:40:43 -04:00
MCamp859
12131cab1e
Edited increase-virtual-disk-size guide for grammar, formatting, and text flow.
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Removed # prompt and replaced with sudo in 4 instances.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net >
2018-04-24 15:28:39 -04:00
MCamp859
35082e2787
Implemented structural feedback in multi-boot.rst. Text edits deferred to next phase of updates.
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Reordered text and included CL details in multi-boot.rst.
Renamed “reset-bl” file references to “restore-bl” for clarity.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net >
2018-04-23 14:13:59 -04:00
Rodrigo Caballero
a237a045e7
Merge pull request #109 from MCamp859/time-edits
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Edited time guide for grammar, formatting, and text flow.
2018-04-20 11:52:23 -05:00
MCamp859
c2f67addd1
Completed review feedback in time doc.
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Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net >
2018-04-19 18:43:33 -04:00
MCamp859
463847b251
Incorporated review feedback in time guide.
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Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net >
2018-04-19 14:41:45 -04:00
Rodrigo Caballero
60504f4334
Merge pull request #118 from Michael-Vincerra/addcurl-vmw-wsplayer
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Adds curl command option to download latest VMware image. Fixes sever…
2018-04-19 12:18:15 -05:00
Michael Vincerra
0d95de5bfb
Corrects input instance from console to bash.
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Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com >
2018-04-19 09:51:09 -07:00
mltullis
9e8467126c
Merge pull request #117 from Michael-Vincerra/addcurl-vmw-esxi-install
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Adds curl command option to download the latest VMware image.
2018-04-18 18:07:50 -07:00
Michael Vincerra
38e1e2a3e5
Corrects WMware file extension in curl command. Fixes layout errors.
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Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com >
2018-04-18 16:55:58 -07:00
Michael Vincerra
7b6101c28b
Adds curl command option to download latest VMware image. Fixes several layout errors.
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Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com >
2018-04-18 16:34:09 -07:00
Michael Vincerra
c03e3cfef7
Adds curl command option to download the latest VMware image.
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Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com >
2018-04-18 15:36:36 -07:00
Michael Vincerra
cc3f0e2016
Adds curl command option to download the latest live image.
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Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com >
2018-04-18 15:05:12 -07:00
Michael Vincerra
cce029917d
Adds curl command option to download the latest kvm image
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Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com >
2018-04-18 14:45:41 -07:00
Michael Vincerra
199d60d77c
Adds curl command option to download latest CL image.
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Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com >
2018-04-18 13:32:37 -07:00
Tom Leavitt
219b2c126a
update privacy policy reference link
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The intel privacy link was still not rendering correctly since the label had a "'s" in it. I renamed it to "Intel privacy policies"
2018-04-18 09:26:48 -07:00
mltullis
bbd64f7d22
Merge pull request #110 from MCamp859/concept-restart-add
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Added reference to restart in parent concepts. Fixed restart label.
2018-04-17 10:45:28 -07:00
Tom Leavitt
f8c99f3751
Update telemetry enable link
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Update the link to intel's privacy policy
2018-04-17 09:44:52 -07:00
Tom Leavitt
48f0d5aabd
Fixed link in telemetry tutorial
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Updated the link for intel's privacy policy to https://www.intel.com/content/www/us/en/privacy/intel-privacy-notice.html
2018-04-17 09:35:00 -07:00
MCamp859
08ab82106a
Added reference to restart in parent concepts. Fixed restart label.
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Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net >
2018-04-16 16:06:25 -04:00
MCamp859
563b806f72
Edited time guide for grammar, formatting, and text flow.
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Changed code-block to bash and made minor text changes.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net >
2018-04-11 15:20:04 -04:00
MCamp859
df4ebae60e
Split multi-boot doc into small files, updated fig refs.
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Added links to Detailed Procedures in main doc.
Renamed image files and figure numbers in text.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net >
2018-04-10 16:32:37 -04:00
Rodrigo Caballero
bd9630ea4c
Merge branch 'master' into smb
2018-04-09 10:50:40 -05:00
Michael Vincerra
18ce81a7f4
Applies minor formatting edits. Performs force push because other contributor accidentally pushed directly to branch swupdaddpkg1.
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Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com >
2018-04-06 17:09:51 -07:00
Michael Vincerra
123a6ac335
Merge branch 'master' of https://github.com/clearlinux/clear-linux-documentation into swupdaddpkg1
2018-04-06 16:41:50 -07:00
Michael Vincerra
fabbf2b634
Revises guide to incorporate suggested revisions from tmarcu, tpleavitt, and MCamp859 on PR 105.
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Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com >
2018-04-06 16:38:30 -07:00
Michael Vincerra
6f6342f57f
Revises guide to prefix each command with sudo and corrects some commands per tmarcu. Incorporates feedback from MCamp on grammar,
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formatting, and text flow. Incorporates feedback from tpleavitt.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com >
2018-04-06 16:23:38 -07:00
Rodrigo Caballero
ad584b4b3d
Merge pull request #103 from rcaballeromx/restart
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Add concept regarding restarting services.
2018-04-05 13:53:52 -05:00
user135711
d7f8576b27
Update enable-user-space.rst
2018-04-05 08:09:38 -07:00
user135711
ff6990efa5
Corrected syntax
2018-04-05 08:02:41 -07:00
MCamp859
ece2cbab30
Incorporated review feedback in restart concept.
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Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net >
2018-04-04 17:56:13 -04:00
user135711
850ac305c7
Added note to increase size of VM partition
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I added a note that might confuse new users when following the getting started sequence download, import vmware VM->enable user space. The linux error will not indicate that the hard drive isn't big enough. The link did not render in the preview for some reason so edit it to conform with your relative links convention and build before pulling.
2018-04-02 19:21:13 -07:00
Michael Vincerra
97f9d90863
Creates new guide on using swupd-add-pkg method for customization of CL. Applies line edits. Adds reference for new guide in
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parent toctree maintenance.rst. Adds note to paragraph one. Applies further line edits.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com >
2018-04-02 10:42:00 -07:00
MCamp859
6525cfe218
Edited text to align with other tutorials.
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Added Prerequisites section.
Added sudo -s as first command and deleted sudo from other commands.
Edited text for active voice and consistency between steps.
Removed gerunds in headings.
Changed figure captions to remove gerunds and differentiate.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net >
2018-03-29 11:48:39 -04:00
Michael Vincerra
f2e73b0004
Changes instances from '%HOME' to '$HOME'; omits openssh-server bundle installation; omits cruft.
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Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com >
2018-03-28 08:12:26 -07:00
mltullis
0c5062dcbf
Merge pull request #102 from Michael-Vincerra/vncstructurefix2
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Flattens nested content in several sections to simplify use cases; fi…
2018-03-27 13:13:25 -07:00
Rodrigo Caballero
dd60ab0102
Merge pull request #93 from MCamp859/custom-container-edits
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Copy edit for grammar, formatting, and text flow.
2018-03-27 12:58:23 -06:00
Michael Vincerra
41fc6c24f7
Further flattens nested items overall. Omits use cases on mac using the built-in screen sharing. In Connect
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to your VNC session, includes steps 1-2 for each use case. Makes configuration of RealVNC optional
section--instead of note.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com >
2018-03-26 16:37:12 -07:00
Rodrigo Caballero
54dcdb5c75
Merge pull request #96 from MCamp859/netwk-bond-edits
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Edited for grammar, formatting, and text flow.
2018-03-26 10:09:11 -06:00
Michael Vincerra
5e8976bfa1
Flattens nested content in several sections to simplify use cases; fixes grammatical and stylistic errors.
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Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com >
2018-03-23 14:55:14 -07:00