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2267 Commits
Author SHA1 Message Date
Mahoney d0de27112f Signed-off-by: Mahoney <genessa.k.mahoney@intel.com> 2018-05-03 11:16:42 -07:00
Mahoney d8cf6db3d8 Completed review feedback and incoporated changes.
Signed-off-by: Mahoney <genessa.k.mahoney@intel.com>
2018-05-03 08:47:57 -07:00
Michael Vincerra 9e6833d1e0 Edits installation instructions for accuracy; corrects grammatical errors.
- Corrects grammatical errors and simplifies instruction for various installation methods.
- Revises bare-metal-manual-install to correct errors and for readability.
- Revises cgdisk-manual-install; omits fig. 16, then directs user to bare-metal-manual-install.
- Revise virtualbox.rst, first two paragraphs for conciseness; omits prefixes to commands
- Revises instruction in Bundle Selector. Fixes Figure 15.
- Corrects erroneous link in first para to bare-metal-manual-install.

Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-05-02 15:20:58 -07:00
Mahoney 786d7f3c25 Copy edits for enable a new user space
Signed-off-by: Mahoney <genessa.k.mahoney@intel.com>
2018-05-01 09:36:47 -07:00
deb-intel f89889e504 Grammar checks in telemetry-enable file
Changed console to bash

Signed-off-by: deb-intel <38864784+deb-intel@users.noreply.github.com>
2018-05-01 09:20:56 -04:00
mltullis 64c4bd9908 Merge pull request #108 from MCamp859/multiboot-edits
Split multi-boot doc into small files, updated fig refs.
2018-04-30 09:32:22 -07:00
mltullis de18d0d24f Merge pull request #122 from MCamp859/image-files-edit
Copy edit of 4 interlinked files in Maint Guide.
2018-04-26 14:58:21 -07:00
mltullis 2250fd2005 Merge pull request #120 from MCamp859/incr-virt-disk-edits
Edited increase-virtual-disk-size guide for grammar, formatting, and …
2018-04-26 14:56:43 -07:00
MCamp859 78d4e0720a Incorporated review feedback.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-04-26 14:53:19 -04:00
MCamp859 65bdc30ad1 Copy edit of 4 interlinked files in Maint Guide.
Files: image types; download verify uncompress for Linux, macOS, and Windows
Edits for branding and format. Removed $ prompts.

Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-04-26 14:31:07 -04:00
MCamp859 22b3d76759 Created how-to-clear-overview as a summary of the How to Clear training.
Updated Reference file and added training overview.

Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-04-25 13:40:43 -04:00
MCamp859 12131cab1e Edited increase-virtual-disk-size guide for grammar, formatting, and text flow.
Removed # prompt and replaced with sudo in 4 instances.

Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-04-24 15:28:39 -04:00
MCamp859 35082e2787 Implemented structural feedback in multi-boot.rst. Text edits deferred to next phase of updates.
Reordered text and included CL details in multi-boot.rst.
Renamed “reset-bl” file references to “restore-bl” for clarity.

Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-04-23 14:13:59 -04:00
Rodrigo Caballero a237a045e7 Merge pull request #109 from MCamp859/time-edits
Edited time guide for grammar, formatting, and text flow.
2018-04-20 11:52:23 -05:00
MCamp859 c2f67addd1 Completed review feedback in time doc.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-04-19 18:43:33 -04:00
MCamp859 463847b251 Incorporated review feedback in time guide.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-04-19 14:41:45 -04:00
Rodrigo Caballero 60504f4334 Merge pull request #118 from Michael-Vincerra/addcurl-vmw-wsplayer
Adds curl command option to download latest VMware image. Fixes sever…
2018-04-19 12:18:15 -05:00
Michael Vincerra 0d95de5bfb Corrects input instance from console to bash.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-04-19 09:51:09 -07:00
mltullis 9e8467126c Merge pull request #117 from Michael-Vincerra/addcurl-vmw-esxi-install
Adds curl command option to download the latest VMware image.
2018-04-18 18:07:50 -07:00
Michael Vincerra 38e1e2a3e5 Corrects WMware file extension in curl command. Fixes layout errors.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-04-18 16:55:58 -07:00
Michael Vincerra 7b6101c28b Adds curl command option to download latest VMware image. Fixes several layout errors.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-04-18 16:34:09 -07:00
Michael Vincerra c03e3cfef7 Adds curl command option to download the latest VMware image.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-04-18 15:36:36 -07:00
Michael Vincerra cc3f0e2016 Adds curl command option to download the latest live image.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-04-18 15:05:12 -07:00
Michael Vincerra cce029917d Adds curl command option to download the latest kvm image
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-04-18 14:45:41 -07:00
Michael Vincerra 199d60d77c Adds curl command option to download latest CL image.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-04-18 13:32:37 -07:00
Tom Leavitt 219b2c126a update privacy policy reference link
The intel privacy link was still not rendering correctly since the label had a "'s" in it.  I renamed it to "Intel privacy policies"
2018-04-18 09:26:48 -07:00
mltullis bbd64f7d22 Merge pull request #110 from MCamp859/concept-restart-add
Added reference to restart in parent concepts. Fixed restart label.
2018-04-17 10:45:28 -07:00
Tom Leavitt f8c99f3751 Update telemetry enable link
Update the link to intel's privacy policy
2018-04-17 09:44:52 -07:00
Tom Leavitt 48f0d5aabd Fixed link in telemetry tutorial
Updated the link for intel's privacy policy to https://www.intel.com/content/www/us/en/privacy/intel-privacy-notice.html
2018-04-17 09:35:00 -07:00
MCamp859 08ab82106a Added reference to restart in parent concepts. Fixed restart label.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-04-16 16:06:25 -04:00
MCamp859 563b806f72 Edited time guide for grammar, formatting, and text flow.
Changed code-block to bash and made minor text changes.

Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-04-11 15:20:04 -04:00
MCamp859 df4ebae60e Split multi-boot doc into small files, updated fig refs.
Added links to Detailed Procedures in main doc.
Renamed image files and figure numbers in text.

Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-04-10 16:32:37 -04:00
Rodrigo Caballero bd9630ea4c Merge branch 'master' into smb 2018-04-09 10:50:40 -05:00
Michael Vincerra 18ce81a7f4 Applies minor formatting edits. Performs force push because other contributor accidentally pushed directly to branch swupdaddpkg1.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-04-06 17:09:51 -07:00
Michael Vincerra 123a6ac335 Merge branch 'master' of https://github.com/clearlinux/clear-linux-documentation into swupdaddpkg1 2018-04-06 16:41:50 -07:00
Michael Vincerra fabbf2b634 Revises guide to incorporate suggested revisions from tmarcu, tpleavitt, and MCamp859 on PR 105.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-04-06 16:38:30 -07:00
Michael Vincerra 6f6342f57f Revises guide to prefix each command with sudo and corrects some commands per tmarcu. Incorporates feedback from MCamp on grammar,
formatting, and text flow. Incorporates feedback from tpleavitt.

Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-04-06 16:23:38 -07:00
Rodrigo Caballero ad584b4b3d Merge pull request #103 from rcaballeromx/restart
Add concept regarding restarting services.
2018-04-05 13:53:52 -05:00
user135711 d7f8576b27 Update enable-user-space.rst 2018-04-05 08:09:38 -07:00
user135711 ff6990efa5 Corrected syntax 2018-04-05 08:02:41 -07:00
MCamp859 ece2cbab30 Incorporated review feedback in restart concept.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-04-04 17:56:13 -04:00
user135711 850ac305c7 Added note to increase size of VM partition
I added a note that might confuse new users when following the getting started sequence download, import vmware VM->enable user space. The linux error will not indicate that the hard drive isn't big enough. The link did not render in the preview for some reason so edit it to conform with your relative links convention and build before pulling.
2018-04-02 19:21:13 -07:00
Michael Vincerra 97f9d90863 Creates new guide on using swupd-add-pkg method for customization of CL. Applies line edits. Adds reference for new guide in
parent toctree maintenance.rst. Adds note to paragraph one.  Applies further line edits.

Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-04-02 10:42:00 -07:00
MCamp859 6525cfe218 Edited text to align with other tutorials.
Added Prerequisites section.
Added sudo -s as first command and deleted sudo from other commands.
Edited text for active voice and consistency between steps.
Removed gerunds in headings.
Changed figure captions to remove gerunds and differentiate.

Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-03-29 11:48:39 -04:00
Michael Vincerra f2e73b0004 Changes instances from '%HOME' to '$HOME'; omits openssh-server bundle installation; omits cruft.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-03-28 08:12:26 -07:00
mltullis 0c5062dcbf Merge pull request #102 from Michael-Vincerra/vncstructurefix2
Flattens nested content in several sections to simplify use cases; fi…
2018-03-27 13:13:25 -07:00
Rodrigo Caballero dd60ab0102 Merge pull request #93 from MCamp859/custom-container-edits
Copy edit for grammar, formatting, and text flow.
2018-03-27 12:58:23 -06:00
Michael Vincerra 41fc6c24f7 Further flattens nested items overall. Omits use cases on mac using the built-in screen sharing. In Connect
to your VNC session, includes steps 1-2 for each use case. Makes configuration of RealVNC optional
section--instead of note.

Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-03-26 16:37:12 -07:00
Rodrigo Caballero 54dcdb5c75 Merge pull request #96 from MCamp859/netwk-bond-edits
Edited for grammar, formatting, and text flow.
2018-03-26 10:09:11 -06:00
Michael Vincerra 5e8976bfa1 Flattens nested content in several sections to simplify use cases; fixes grammatical and stylistic errors.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-03-23 14:55:14 -07:00