editing getting started sections for correct grammar given ref links

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Bundle overview
############################################################
.. _bundles_overview:
Bundles overview
################
Linux-based operating systems contain the code of several hundred, if
not thousands, of open source projects. To make this manageable,
@@ -12,14 +14,14 @@ distributions deploy their software. With those kinds of distributions,
system administrators can then install and update sub-packages
individually or as a set, using tools such as "yum" and "apt-get."
The Clear Linux* OS for Intel® Architecture does things a bit differently. While we also use the
concept of packages to manage compiling source code into binaries, we do
not use the package concept to deploy software. Instead, we provide
"bundles" that  provide a set of functionality to the system
administrator, independent of how many and which pieces of the upstream
open source projects are needed for this functionality. The diagram
below gives an overall picture of it.
The Clear Linux* OS for Intel® Architecture takes a slightly different
approach. While we also use the concept of packages to manage compiling
source code into binaries, we do not use the package concept to deploy
software. Instead, we provide "bundles" that  provide a set of functionality
to the system administrator, independent of how many and which pieces of
the upstream open source projects are needed for this functionality. The
diagram below gives an overall picture of it.
.. image:: _static/images/bundles_overview.png
:align: center
:alt: confirmation
:alt: bundles-overview
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Getting started with Clear Linux* OS for Intel® Architecture
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The easiest way to give Clear Linux OS for Intel Architecture a spin is to download a
recent KVM image from the `image directory <http://download.clearlinux.org/image/>`_
on our download page. This directory contains a current image, the UEFI firmware
The easiest way to give Clear Linux OS for Intel Architecture a spin is to download a
recent KVM image from the `image directory <http://download.clearlinux.org/image/>`_
on our download page. This directory contains a current image, the UEFI firmware
helper and the KVM start helper script. See :ref:`gs_running_clr_virtual` for details.
You can also :ref:`gs_installing_clr_as_host` on a target computer.
You can also try :ref:`gs_installing_clr_as_host` on a target computer.
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For feedback on installation or other topics, please feel free to write in to our
`mailing list <https://lists.clearlinux.org/mailman/listinfo/dev>`_.
Note: You can also :ref:`gs_running_clr_virtual`.
Note: You can also try :ref:`gs_running_clr_virtual`.
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To start the image, run the ``start_qemu.sh`` script from
`here <http://download.clearlinux.org/image/start_qemu.sh>`_, or modify
the following script for your needs and run it from the command line
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with ``$ script clr_image``::
#!/bin/bash
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with ``$ script clr_image``
.. code-block:: bash
#!/bin/bash
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if [ $# -eq 0 ] ; then
echo "Please provide an image to emulate as first argument"
exit 1
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-net user,hostfwd=tcp::2223-:22 \
-monitor stdio "$@"
To run this script, connect from host via SSH. Take note that SSH is not
enabled by default. To enable it, log in through serial console with the
username ``root``. After setting the password, enable root login via SSH
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by configuring ``/etc/ssh/sshd_config`` with this content::
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by configuring :file:`/etc/ssh/sshd_config` with this content::
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by configuring :file:`/etc/ssh/sshd_config` with this line
::
PermitRootLogin yes
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$ ssh -p 2223 root@localhost
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Alternately, there are a few other ways to approach this.
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Alternatively, there are a few other ways to approach this.
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- To run the script without modifying its permissions::
$ bash start_qemu.sh clr_image
- To run it as a background process::
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$ `bash start_qemu.sh clr_image` &
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$ bash start_qemu.sh clr_image &
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- If you'd like to run the script with execute permission::
$ chmod +x start_qemu.sh
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- And to run it as a background process::
$ ./start_qemu.sh clr_image &
$ ./start_qemu.sh clr_image &