Updates to aws-web.rst per Rodrigo comments

Updates to the aws-web.rst file to address comments from Rodrigo
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Tom Leavitt
2017-11-27 15:25:25 -08:00
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Prerequisites
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This tutorial assumes the following:
This tutorial assumes the following statements are true:
* You are using a linux-based system to access AWS and can run :command:`SSH`
to access the remote |CL| AWS image.
* Your browser puts downloaded files in the :file:`$HOME/Downloads` directory.
* You have already set up an AWS user account and logged in to the AWS
* You have already set up an AWS user account and logged into the AWS
console.
.. note::
@@ -32,8 +32,8 @@ This tutorial assumes the following:
Locate, select, and launch the Clear Linux OS Basic AMI
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#. Start from your main AWS console, select :guilabel:`EC2` as shown in
figure 1:
#. Start from your main AWS services console menu in your browser and select the
:guilabel:`EC2` text as shown in figure 1:
.. figure:: figures/aws-web-1.png
:scale: 50 %
@@ -41,10 +41,10 @@ Locate, select, and launch the Clear Linux OS Basic AMI
Figure 1: :guilabel:`AWS Console`
This brings up your :guilabel:`EC2 Dashboard`.
This selection brings up your :guilabel:`EC2 Dashboard` menu.
#. To create a new |CL| instance from the :guilabel:`EC2 Dashboard` menu,
select the :guilabel:`Launch Instance` as shown in figure 2:
select the :guilabel:`Launch Instance` button as shown in figure 2:
.. figure:: figures/aws-web-2.png
:scale: 50 %
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ Locate, select, and launch the Clear Linux OS Basic AMI
Figure 2: :guilabel:`EC2 Dashboard`
This takes you to the
This selection takes you to the
:guilabel:`Step 1: Choose an Amazon Machine Image (AMI)` menu.
#. To find the :guilabel:`|CL| OS Basic` AMI in the
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ Locate, select, and launch the Clear Linux OS Basic AMI
following:
#. In the lefthand navigation window, select the
:guilabel:`AWS Marketplace` to bring up the search bar to
:guilabel:`AWS Marketplace` menu item to bring up the search bar to
:guilabel:`Search AWS Marketplace Products`.
#. In the search bar, type `clear linux os` and hit the :kbd:`Enter` key to
@@ -88,6 +88,12 @@ Locate, select, and launch the Clear Linux OS Basic AMI
#. The :guilabel:`Choose Instance Type` menu appears as shown in figure 5.
.. figure:: figures/aws-web-5.png
:scale: 50 %
:alt: Choose an Instance Type
Figure 5: :guilabel:`Choose an Instance Type`
Select the :guilabel:`t2.micro` type by clicking the box on the left side
of the instance and then select the :guilabel:`Review and Launch` button to
move to the :guilabel:`Step 7: Review the Instance Launch` menu.
@@ -99,13 +105,8 @@ Locate, select, and launch the Clear Linux OS Basic AMI
:guilabel:`Review and Launch` button if you want to further customize
this |CL| instance.
.. figure:: figures/aws-web-5.png
:scale: 50 %
:alt: Choose an Instance Type
Figure 5: :guilabel:`Choose an Instance Type`
#. The :guilabel:`Step 7: Review the Instance Launch` menu allows you to
#. The :guilabel:`Step 7: Review the Instance Launch` menu, shown in figure 6,
allows you to
:guilabel:`Cancel` the process, return to the :guilabel:`Previous` screen
to change the configuration or :guilabel:`Launch` the instance defined.
@@ -123,13 +124,16 @@ Locate, select, and launch the Clear Linux OS Basic AMI
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:alt: Select an existing key pair or create a new pair
figure 7: :guilabel:`Select an existing key pair or create a new pair`
Figure 7: :guilabel:`Select an existing key pair or create a new pair`
#. Select the :guilabel:`Create a new key pair` option.
#. For the :guilabel:`Key pair name`, enter `AWSClearTestKey`.
#. For the :guilabel:`Key pair name` field, enter `AWSClearTestKey`.
#. Select the :guilabel:`Download Key Pair` button to download the
:file:`AWSClearTestKey.pem` to your browser's defined
:file:`Downloads` directory.
#. When the file finishes downloading, select the
:guilabel:`Launch Instances` button to proceed to the
:guilabel:`Launch Status` menu shown in figure 8.
@@ -138,17 +142,17 @@ Locate, select, and launch the Clear Linux OS Basic AMI
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:alt: Launch Status
figure 8: :guilabel:`Launch Status`
Figure 8: :guilabel:`Launch Status`
#. Once the :guilabel:`Launch Status` page changes to what is shown in
figure 9, select the :guilabel:`View Instances` button to view your
:guilabel:`Instances` dashboard.
#. Once the :guilabel:`Launch Status` page changes to what is shown in
figure 9, select the :guilabel:`View Instances` button to view your
:guilabel:`Instances` dashboard.
.. figure:: figures/aws-web-9.png
:scale: 50 %
:alt: View Instance
.. figure:: figures/aws-web-9.png
:scale: 50 %
:alt: View Instance
figure 9: :guilabel:`View Instance`
Figure 9: :guilabel:`View Instance`
Connect to your Clear Linux OS Basic instance
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@@ -161,23 +165,23 @@ other instances available, they are also listed but not selected.
:scale: 50 %
:alt: Instance Dashboard
figure 10: :guilabel:`Instance Dashboard`
Figure 10: :guilabel:`Instance Dashboard`
#. To connect to your running instance, click the :guilabel:`Connect` button
located at the top of your dashboard. This brings up the pop-up dialog
located at the top of your dashboard. AWS brings up the pop-up dialog
box shown in figure 11 describing how to connect to your running instance.
.. figure:: figures/aws-web-11.png
:scale: 50 %
:alt: Connect to Your Instance
figure 11: :guilabel:`Connect to Your Instance`
Figure 11: :guilabel:`Connect to Your Instance`
#. Open a terminal on your system. You should be in your :file:`$HOME`
directory.
#. Copy the previously downloaded keyfile from the :file:`Downloads`
directory.
directory to the current directory.
.. code-block:: console
@@ -227,7 +231,7 @@ system as shown in figure 12:
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:alt: sudo swupd update
figure 12: :guilabel:`sudo swupd update`
Figure 12: :guilabel:`sudo swupd update`
In this example we updated from version 18940 to 19100.
@@ -241,26 +245,28 @@ instance from running.
#. Select the :guilabel:`Actions` button to bring up a pull-down menu.
#. Select the :guilabel:`Instance State` to expand the options.
#. Select the :guilabel:`Instance State` menu item to expand the options.
#. Select :guilabel:`Stop` to shut down the running instance.
#. Select :guilabel:`Stop` menu item to shut down the running instance.
These steps are illustrated in figure 13.
Figure 13 illustrates these steps.
.. figure:: figures/aws-web-13.png
:scale: 50 %
:alt: Stop Instance
.. figure:: figures/aws-web-13.png
:scale: 50 %
:alt: Stop Instance
figure 13: :guilabel:`Stop Instance`
Figure 13: :guilabel:`Stop Instance`
#. A pop-up dialog box appears warning you that any ephemeral storage of
your instance will be lost. Select :guilabel:`Yes, Stop` to stop your |CL|
instance.
your instance will be lost. Select the :guilabel:`Yes, Stop` button to stop
your |CL| instance.
.. figure:: figures/aws-web-14.png
:scale: 50 %
:alt: Stop Instances
figure 14: :guilabel:`Stop Instances`
Figure 14: :guilabel:`Stop Instances`
Congratulations! You are up and running with |CL| on AWS.
Congratulations! You are up and running with |CL| on AWS. To see what you
can do with your |CL| instance, visit our :ref:`tutorials <tutorials>`
section for examples on using your |CL| system.