Merge pull request #123 from deb-intel/telemetry-edits

Grammar checks in telemetry-enable file
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mltullis
2018-05-01 11:23:25 -07:00
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@@ -26,9 +26,9 @@ to improve system stability. If you chose not to join this program at that
time then the telemetry software bundle is not added to your system.
To install the telemetry bundle, enter the following command as either the
root user or with :command:`sudo` priveleges:
root user or with :command:`sudo` privileges:
.. code-block:: console
.. code-block:: bash
sudo swupd bundle-add telemetrics
@@ -38,9 +38,9 @@ opt-in for the service.
Enable Telemetry
****************
To start telemetry on your system run the following command:
To start telemetry on your system, run the following command:
.. code-block:: console
.. code-block:: bash
sudo telemctl start
@@ -53,9 +53,9 @@ begin to send telemetry data to the server defined in the file
Disable Telemetry
*****************
To disable the telemetry daemon run the following command:
To disable the telemetry daemon, run the following command:
.. code-block:: console
.. code-block:: bash
sudo telemctl stop
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ Opt-out of telemetry
To stop sending telemetrics data from your system, opt out of the
telemetry service:
.. code-block:: console
.. code-block:: bash
sudo telemctl opt-out
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ Opt-in to telemetry
Conversely, to opt-in to the telemetry services, simply enter the opt-in
command and start the service:
.. code-block:: console
.. code-block:: bash
sudo telemctl opt-in
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ Remove the telemetry software bundle
To completely remove telemetrics from your system, use the command
:command:`swupd` to remove the telemetry software bundle:
.. code-block:: console
.. code-block:: bash
sudo swupd bundle-remove telemetrics