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Merge pull request #123 from deb-intel/telemetry-edits
Grammar checks in telemetry-enable file
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@@ -26,9 +26,9 @@ to improve system stability. If you chose not to join this program at that
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time then the telemetry software bundle is not added to your system.
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To install the telemetry bundle, enter the following command as either the
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root user or with :command:`sudo` priveleges:
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root user or with :command:`sudo` privileges:
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.. code-block:: console
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.. code-block:: bash
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sudo swupd bundle-add telemetrics
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@@ -38,9 +38,9 @@ opt-in for the service.
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Enable Telemetry
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****************
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To start telemetry on your system run the following command:
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To start telemetry on your system, run the following command:
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.. code-block:: console
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.. code-block:: bash
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sudo telemctl start
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@@ -53,9 +53,9 @@ begin to send telemetry data to the server defined in the file
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Disable Telemetry
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*****************
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To disable the telemetry daemon run the following command:
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To disable the telemetry daemon, run the following command:
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.. code-block:: console
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sudo telemctl stop
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@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ Opt-out of telemetry
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To stop sending telemetrics data from your system, opt out of the
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telemetry service:
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.. code-block:: console
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sudo telemctl opt-out
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@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ Opt-in to telemetry
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Conversely, to opt-in to the telemetry services, simply enter the opt-in
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command and start the service:
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.. code-block:: console
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.. code-block:: bash
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sudo telemctl opt-in
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@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ Remove the telemetry software bundle
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To completely remove telemetrics from your system, use the command
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:command:`swupd` to remove the telemetry software bundle:
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.. code-block:: console
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.. code-block:: bash
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sudo swupd bundle-remove telemetrics
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