Updates based on native Chinese speaker review. (#1036)

* Updates based on native Chinese speaker review.

Signed-off-by: Kevin Putnam <kevin.putnam@intel.com>

* Updates based on feedback.

Signed-off-by: Kevin Putnam <kevin.putnam@intel.com>

source/get-started/cloud-install/qingcloud.rst

@@ -17,16 +17,15 @@ Prerequisites
 This tutorial assumes that you have completed the following configuration steps:
 
 * Your environment can run SSH to access remote Clear Linux OS virtual hosts.
-* You know the absolute path where the browser downloaded the file. -- what
-  is this for?
+* You know the absolute path where the browser downloaded the file.
 * You have set up a user account for QingCloud and that the account is
   enabled and logged in to the QingCloud console. To learn more about
   QingCloud and setting up an account, please visit QingCloud's official
   `website <https://www.qingcloud.com>`_.
 
 
-Select and start |CL| virtual host QingCloud console
-*****************************************************
+Select and start |CL| virtual host with QingCloud console
+*********************************************************
 
 #. Select :guilabel:`计算>主机` (Compute>Host) in the main menu of the
    QingCloud console and click the :guilabel:`创建` (Create) option.
@@ -45,11 +44,11 @@ Select and start |CL| virtual host QingCloud console
 
       Select |CL| to create a virtual host
 
-#. In the configuration selection interface, you can see virtual hosts of
-   different hardware configuration types, such as adjusting the number of CPU
-   cores, memory size, and hard disk and copy backup strategies. Here we will
-   choose the default configuration for the next demonstration. Click the
-   :guilabel:`下一步` (Next) button to go to the network settings interface.
+#. In the configuration selection interface, you can configure the
+   number of CPU cores, memory size, and the storage backup method.
+   For demonstration purposes, we will choose the default configuration.
+   Click the :guilabel:`下一步` (Next) button to go to the network settings
+   interface.
 
    .. figure:: /_figures/qingcloud/QingCloud-3.png
       :scale: 50 %
@@ -82,7 +81,7 @@ Create an SSH key (Optional)
       Create SSH Key
 
 #. In the SSH key creation interface, you can fill in the key name, and select
-   the encryption method you need. After confirming that it is correct, click
+   encryption method you prefer. After confirming that they are correct, click
    the :guilabel:`提交` (Submit) button.
 
    .. figure:: /_figures/qingcloud/QingCloud-6.png
@@ -91,9 +90,8 @@ Create an SSH key (Optional)
 
       New SSH Key
 
-#. After the key download button appears, please click the download button
-   within 10 minutes to complete the download of the key, and save the key to
-   a local place for later connection to the virtual host.
+#. After the download button appears, please download the key within 10
+   minutes, and save the key locally for connecting to the virtual host later.
 
    .. figure:: /_figures/qingcloud/QingCloud-7.png
       :scale: 50 %
@@ -102,8 +100,8 @@ Create an SSH key (Optional)
       Download SSH Key
 
 #. After ensuring that the SSH key has been properly downloaded and saved,
-   check the basic information of the virtual host. After confirming that it is
-   correct, click the :guilabel:`创建` (Create) button.
+   check the basic information of the virtual host. After confirming that they
+   are correct, click the :guilabel:`创建` (Create) button.
 
    .. figure:: /_figures/qingcloud/QingCloud-8.png
       :scale: 50 %
@@ -111,11 +109,11 @@ Create an SSH key (Optional)
 
       Confirm the information and create a virtual host
 
-After confirming, QingCloud will create the Clear Linux OS virtual host. You
-can check the current status of the virtual host in the new interface.
+QingCloud will now create the Clear Linux OS virtual host. You
+can check the state of the virtual host in the new interface.
 
-Apply for a public IP and add it to the virtual 
-***********************************************
+Apply for a public IP and add it to the virtual host
+****************************************************
 
 #. Since QingCloud does not automatically assign a public IP address to a
    virtual host created using the default network, we need to manually apply
@@ -138,21 +136,21 @@ Apply for a public IP and add it to the virtual
 
       Apply for public IP   
 
-   After clicking the application, the prompt bar will pop up, read it
+   After clicking the apply button, a dialog will pop up. Read it
    carefully and click the :guilabel:`继续申请公网IP` (Continue to apply for
    public IP) button.
 
    .. figure:: /_figures/qingcloud/QingCloud-11.png
       :scale: 50 %
-      :alt: Confirmation in the prompt bar
+      :alt: Confirmation dialog
 
-      Confirmation in the prompt bar
+      Confirmation dialog
 
-#. On the application for public network IP page, confirm and fill in the
-   relevant information, including the charging mode and bandwidth limit (the 
-   flow rate mode is used in this tutorial and the 2Mbps bandwidth limit is
-   set). After confirming that it is correct, click :guilabel:`提交` (Submit)
-   button.
+#. On the public network IP application page, confirm and fill in the
+   relevant information, including the charging mode and bandwidth upper limit
+   (the charge-by-bandwidth mode is used in this tutorial and the 2Mbps
+   bandwidth limit is set). After confirming that they are correct, click
+   :guilabel:`提交` (Submit) button.
 
    .. figure:: /_figures/qingcloud/QingCloud-12.png
       :scale: 50 %
@@ -170,7 +168,7 @@ Apply for a public IP and add it to the virtual
       Network Interface
 
 #. On the network card interface, select the network card of the |CL| host
-   that you just created, and click the :guilabel:`更多操作` (More Actions)
+   that you just created. Click the :guilabel:`更多操作` (More Actions)
    button above, and then click the :guilabel:`绑定公网IPv4` (Binding Public
    Network IPv4) button.
 
@@ -182,7 +180,8 @@ Apply for a public IP and add it to the virtual
 
 #. On the binding public network IP confirmation interface, select the public
    IP address that has just been applied for, and click the :guilabel:`提交`
-   (Submit) button below . After waiting a moment, the status will change.
+   (Submit) button below . After waiting a moment, the state of the |CL|
+   virtual host will change.
 
    .. figure:: /_figures/qingcloud/QingCloud-15.png
       :scale: 50 %
@@ -196,7 +195,7 @@ Apply for a public IP and add it to the virtual
 
       Public network IP binding succeeded
 
-Connect to |CL| virtual 
+Connect to |CL| virtual host
 *********************************
 
 Click the :guilabel:`计算>主机` (Compute>Host) buttons on the left side of the
@@ -209,8 +208,8 @@ navigation bar to confirm that the current virtual host is running and has a pub
    Confirm that the virtual host is currently in a normal state
 
 #. Copy the public IP address of the current |CL| virtual host and
-   connect using an SSH client. Here we need to use the previously saved SSH
-   key.
+   connect to it from an SSH client. Here we need to use the previously saved
+   SSH key.
 
 #. In this tutorial, the MobaXterm client is used as an example to demonstrate
    the login process. Check each item as shown. For the user name, we choose
@@ -223,8 +222,8 @@ navigation bar to confirm that the current virtual host is running and has a pub
 
       SSH login virtual host settings
 
-#. After the setting is successful, click :guilabel:`Login` to log in to the
-   |CL| virtual host.
+#. Click :guilabel:`Login` to log in to the
+   |CL| virtual host after completing the setup process.
 
    .. figure:: /_figures/qingcloud/QingCloud-19.png
       :scale: 50 %