Revises telemetry figure to correct URL; reorders steps. (#1040)

* Revises telemetry figure to correct URL; reorders steps.
- Reorders Assign Hostname to match oreder of menus in UI
- Corrects typos and grammatically unclear sentences.
- Renames figures as a result of reordering sections, above.
- Closes #1039.

Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>

* Recaptures Fig 31, Swupd Mirror menu:
- Adds "allow installation over insecure connections..." checkbox

Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michael.vincerra@intel.com>
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michael vincerra
2020-02-20 15:43:15 -08:00
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6 changed files with 37 additions and 40 deletions
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@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ Launch the |CL| Installer
Figure 2: root login
#. .. note::
.. note::
If a wireless connection is needed, connect to the network using
:command:`nmtui` before lauching the installer. See the documentation on
@@ -127,8 +127,7 @@ The |CL| Installer Main Menu appears as shown in Figure 4.
Figure 4: Clear Linux OS Installer
The |CL| Installer Main Menu has two tabs: :guilabel:`[R] Required options`
and :guilabel:`[A] Advanced options`. Navigate between tabs using the arrow
these shortcut keys:
and :guilabel:`[A] Advanced options`. Navigate between tabs using these shortcut keys:
* :kbd:`Shift+A` for :guilabel:`[A] Advanced options`
* :kbd:`Shift+R` for :guilabel:`[R] Required options`
@@ -160,8 +159,6 @@ Choose Timezone
#. In :guilabel:`Select System Timezone`, use :kbd:`Up/Down` arrows
navigate to the desired timezone.
.. todo: User need only select Enter; can only select Confirm with mouse.
#. Press :kbd:`Enter` to confirm.
.. figure:: /_figures/bare-metal-install-server/bare-metal-install-server-05.png
@@ -749,6 +746,31 @@ Bundle selection is disabled if no network connection exists.
Optional: Skip to `Finish installation`_.
Assign Hostname
===============
#. In Advanced Options, select :guilabel:`Assign Hostname`.
#. In :guilabel:`Hostname`, enter the hostname only (excluding the domain).
.. note::
Hostname does not allow empty spaces. Hostname must start with an
alphanumeric character but may also contain hyphens. Maximum length of
63 characters.
.. figure:: /_figures/bare-metal-install-server/bare-metal-install-server-28.png
:scale: 100%
:alt: Assign Hostname
Figure 28: Assign Hostname
#. Navigate to :kbd:`Confirm` until highlighted.
#. Select :kbd:`Confirm`.
Optional: Skip to `Finish installation`_.
Kernel Command Line
===================
@@ -762,11 +784,11 @@ new kernel.
#. Select :kbd:`Enter`.
.. figure:: /_figures/bare-metal-install-server/bare-metal-install-server-28.png
.. figure:: /_figures/bare-metal-install-server/bare-metal-install-server-29.png
:scale: 100%
:alt: Kernel Command Line
Figure 28: Kernel Command Line
Figure 29: Kernel Command Line
#. Choose from the following options.
@@ -783,15 +805,15 @@ Kernel Selection
================
#. Select a kernel option. By default, the latest kernel release is
selected. Native kernel is shown in Figure 29.
selected. Native kernel is shown in Figure 30.
#. To select a different kernel, navigate to it using :guilabel:`Tab`.
.. figure:: /_figures/bare-metal-install-server/bare-metal-install-server-29.png
.. figure:: /_figures/bare-metal-install-server/bare-metal-install-server-30.png
:scale: 100%
:alt: Kernel selection
Figure 29 Kernel selection
Figure 30 Kernel selection
#. Select :kbd:`Spacebar` to select the desired option.
@@ -810,36 +832,11 @@ If you have your own custom mirror of |CL|, you can add its URL.
#. Select :kbd:`Confirm`.
.. figure:: /_figures/bare-metal-install-server/bare-metal-install-server-30.png
.. figure:: /_figures/bare-metal-install-server/bare-metal-install-server-31.png
:scale: 100%
:alt: Swupd Mirror
Figure 30: Swupd Mirror
Optional: Skip to `Finish installation`_.
Assign Hostname
===============
#. In Advanced Options, select :guilabel:`Assign Hostname`.
#. In :guilabel:`Hostname`, enter the hostname only (excluding the domain).
.. note::
Hostname does not allow empty spaces. Hostname must start with an
alphanumeric character but may also contain hyphens. Maximum length of
63 characters.
.. figure:: /_figures/bare-metal-install-server/bare-metal-install-server-31.png
:scale: 100%
:alt: Assign Hostname
Figure 31: Assign Hostname
#. Navigate to :kbd:`Confirm` until highlighted.
#. Select :kbd:`Confirm`.
Figure 31: Swupd Mirror
Optional: Skip to `Finish installation`_.
@@ -872,9 +869,9 @@ Save Configuration Settings
.. figure:: /_figures/bare-metal-install-server/bare-metal-install-server-33.png
:scale: 100%
:alt: Automatic OS Updates
:alt: Save configuration to YAML file
Figure 33: Automatic OS Updates
Figure 33: Save configuration to YAML file
#. Use the :file:`clr-installer.yaml` file to install |CL|, with the same
configuration, on multiple targets.
@@ -954,7 +951,7 @@ Erase LVM Partitions Before Installing |CL|
===========================================
If youre planning to install |CL| on a drive that has LVM partitions,
you must erase them first before using clr-installer.
you must erase them first before using the clr-installer.
Here is an example of a drive (/dev/sda) with LVMs: