Merge pull request #706 from krisdale/kd-transl-fix1

Minor grammatical updates requested in support of upcoming translated content.
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Kristal Dale
2019-08-06 17:25:38 -07:00
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12 changed files with 34 additions and 38 deletions
@@ -522,7 +522,7 @@ Create partitions per requirements in Table 1.
- Mount Point
- Default size
* - **VFAT(FAT32)**
* - **VFAT (FAT32)**
- boot
- /boot
- 150MB
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@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ Prerequisites
Create a bootable USB drive on Linux\*
**************************************
Make sure you have have completed all `Prerequisites`_.
Make sure you have completed all `Prerequisites`_.
Before burning the image onto your USB drive,
:ref:`verify and decompress your image <verify-linux>`.
@@ -32,7 +32,8 @@ Burn the |CL| image onto a USB drive
.. caution::
|CAUTION-BACKUP-USB|
Burning an image formats the USB drive, and will destroy all pre-existing
content. Back up your data before proceeding.
#. Open a terminal emulator and get root privilege.
@@ -98,14 +99,16 @@ Burn the |CL| image onto a USB drive
.. caution::
|CAUTION-UNMOUNT-USB-PARTITIONS|
Not fully unmounting the USB drive before burning an image could cause
file system checksum errors in it. If this happens, burn the image again,
ensuring all the USB drive partitions are unmounted first.
.. _bootable-usb-mac:
Create a bootable USB drive on macOS\*
**************************************
Make sure you have have completed all `Prerequisites`_.
Make sure you have completed all `Prerequisites`_.
Before burning the image onto your USB drive,
:ref:`verify and decompress your image <verify-mac>`.
@@ -115,7 +118,8 @@ Burn the |CL| image onto a USB drive
.. caution::
|CAUTION-BACKUP-USB|
Burning an image formats the USB drive, and will destroy all pre-existing
content. Back up your data before proceeding.
#. Launch the Terminal app.
@@ -164,7 +168,7 @@ Burn the |CL| image onto a USB drive
Create a bootable USB drive on Windows\*
****************************************
Make sure you have have completed all `Prerequisites`_.
Make sure you have completed all `Prerequisites`_.
Before burning the image onto your USB drive,
:ref:`verify and decompress your image <verify-windows>`.
@@ -174,7 +178,8 @@ Burn the |CL| image onto a USB drive
.. caution::
|CAUTION-BACKUP-USB|
Burning an image formats the USB drive, and will destroy all pre-existing
content. Back up your data before proceeding.
#. Download the `Rufus`_ utility to burn the image onto a USB drive.
We use Rufus 3.5 here. **Only use the latest version of Rufus**.
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ Setup |CL| VM on GCP
* Click the :guilabel:`Navigation menu` icon on the upper left screen menu.
* Select the :menuselection:`Storage` item from the side bar on the left. You
* Select the :menuselection:`Storage` item from the sidebar on the left. You
will be sent to the Storage Browser tool or the Cloud Storage overview page.
.. figure:: figures/gce/01-cloud-storage.png
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ Please refer to `Install Hyper-V on Windows 10`_ to enable and configure
Create a virtual network
************************
Once *Hyper-V* has been enabled on your Windows system you will need to
Once *Hyper-V* has been enabled on your Windows system, you will need to
create a virtual network in the **Hyper-V Manager**. Refer to the
`Create a virtual network`_ documentation to create and configure
a virtual network.
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ Prerequisites
#. Enable virtualization, such as `Intel® Virtualization Technology`_
(Intel® VT), on the host system from EFI/BIOS.
#. Download and install |VB| **version 6.0 or greater** from
#. Download and install |VB| **version 6.0 or later** from
`VirtualBox`_ using the `VirtualBox Installation Instructions`_ for your
platform.
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ Download and extract the |CL| installer ISO
#. Decompress the downloaded image.
- On Windows you can use `7zip`_ to extract the file by right-clicking the
- On Windows, you can use `7zip`_ to extract the file by right-clicking the
file to *Extract Here* (in the same directory)
.. figure:: figures/vbox/virtualbox-cl-installer-01.png
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ details about using different settings are available in the VirtualBox manual se
- **File location**
- **File size**: **32.00 GB**. Adjust size to your needs.
- **Hard disk file type**: `VDI (VirtualBox Disk Image)`
- **Storage on physical hard disk**:`Dynamically allocated`
- **Storage on physical hard disk**: `Dynamically allocated`
.. figure:: figures/vbox/virtualbox-cl-installer-03.png
:scale: 100%
@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@ virtual hard disk.
labeled :guilabel:`clear-<VERSION>-live-server.iso` under the
:guilabel:`Controller: IDE`.
#. From the :guilabel:`Attributes` column at right, in :guilabel:`Optical Drive`,
#. From the :guilabel:`Attributes` column on the right, in :guilabel:`Optical Drive`,
select the blue CD icon beside and click
:guilabel:`Remove Disk from Virtual Drive`.
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ Manually installing |CL| on a new VM gives additional configuration flexibility
during installation. For example: alternate disk sizes, number of partitions,
pre-installed bundles, etc.
If you prefer to use a preconfigured |CL| VMware image instead, refer to
If you prefer to use a pre-configured |CL| VMware image instead, refer to
:ref:`vmware-esxi-preconfigured-cl-image`.
.. note::
@@ -1,9 +1,9 @@
.. _vmware-esxi-preconfigured-cl-image:
Run preconfigured |CL-ATTR| image as a VMware\* ESXi guest OS
#############################################################
Run pre-configured |CL-ATTR| image as a VMware\* ESXi guest OS
##############################################################
This page explains how to deploy a preconfigured |CL| VMware
This page explains how to deploy a pre-configured |CL| VMware
:abbr:`VM (Virtual Machine)` image on a VMware ESXi 6.5 host.
.. contents::
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ Overview
of server hardware. With VMware ESXi, you can create, configure, manage,
and run |CL-ATTR| virtual machines at scale.
We provide a preconfigured |CL| VMware image that can be run on a VMware ESXi
We provide a pre-configured |CL| VMware image that can be run on a VMware ESXi
6.5 host.
If manuall installation is preferred, refer to :ref:`vmware-esxi-install-cl`.
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ Convert the |CL| image to an ESXi-supported format
**************************************************
Once the |CL| VMware prebuilt image has been uploaded to the VMware ESXi
datastore, it must be converted to a format for usable with VMware's ESXi
datastore, it must be converted to a format for use with VMware's ESXi
hypervisor.
The steps in this section can also be referenced from the VMware documentation on `Cloning and converting virtual machine disks with vmkfstools`_
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ The steps in this section can also be referenced from the VMware documentation o
If there is no :abbr:`vMA (vSphere Management Assistant)` appliance or :abbr:`vCLI (vSphere CLI)` configured and available,
you can temporarily enable SSH directly on the ESXi host by following the
steps described in `Enable the Secure Shell (SSH) in the VMware Host Client`_ .
steps described in `Enable the Secure Shell (SSH) in the VMware Host Client`_.
As a security best practice, remember to disable SSH access after following the steps in this section.
@@ -205,7 +205,7 @@ VMware image. Also, in order to boot |CL|, you must enable UEFI support.
Figure 8: VMware ESXi - Remove hard drive
#. Since a preconfigured image will be used,
#. Since a pre-configured image will be used,
the :guilabel:`CD/DVD Drive 1` setting will not be needed. Disable it
by unchecking the :guilabel:`Connect` checkbox. See Figure 9.
@@ -216,7 +216,7 @@ VMware image. Also, in order to boot |CL|, you must enable UEFI support.
Figure 9: VMware ESXi - Disconnect the CD/DVD drive
#. Attach the :file:`clear-[version number]-esxi.vmdk` file that was
converted from the preconfigured |CL| VMware image.
converted from the pre-configured |CL| VMware image.
#. Click the :guilabel:`Add hard disk` button and select the
:guilabel:`Existing hard drive` option. See Figure 10.
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@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ autospec uses **mock** as a sandbox to run the builds. Visit the `mock wiki`_ fo
additional information on using mock.
For a general understanding of how an RPM works, visit
the `rpm website`_ or the `RPM Packaging Guide`_ .
the `rpm website`_ or the `RPM Packaging Guide`_.
How it works
************
@@ -392,7 +392,7 @@ To test an autospec-created package inside a VM:
sudo ./start_qemu.sh clear.img
#. A new |CL| VM will launch in the console. Log into the VM as *root* and set
a new pasword for the VM.
a new password for the VM.
#. Check that the software is installed in the |CL| VM as expected and perform
any relevant tests.
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@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ Description
***********
|CL| is a rolling release and produces an average of 10 releases per week using the
ister tool. With each release we produce multiple
ister tool. With each release, we produce multiple
:ref:`image types for different environments <image-types>` and use cases such
as installers, Hyper-V, KVM, or VMWare.
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@@ -545,8 +545,8 @@ will install the header file that matches your |CL| version.
Classification:
Type: char array
Value: It should have the form, DOMAIN/PROBENAME/REST: DOMAIN is the
reverse domain to use as a namespace for the probe (e.g. org.clearlinux);
PROBENAME is the name of the probe; and REST is an arbitrary value that
reverse domain to use as a namespace for the probe (e.g. org.clearlinux),
PROBENAME is the name of the probe, and REST is an arbitrary value that
the probe should use to classify the record. The maximum length for the
classification string is 122 bytes. Each sub-category may be no longer
than 40 bytes long. Two / delimiters are required.
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@@ -6,15 +6,6 @@
.. |CC| replace:: Clear Containers
.. |CAUTION-BACKUP-USB| replace::
Burning an image formats the USB drive, and will destroy all pre-existing
content. Back up your data before proceeding.
.. |CAUTION-UNMOUNT-USB-PARTITIONS| replace::
Not fully unmounting the USB drive before burning an image could cause
file system checksum errors in it. If this happens, burn the image again
ensuring all the USB drive partitions are unmounted first.
.. |VB| replace:: VirtualBox
.. |VBM| replace:: VirtualBox Manager
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@@ -147,7 +147,7 @@ Pulling and running an image from Docker Hub
********************************************
`Docker Hub`_ is a publically available container image repository which
comes preconfigured with Docker. In the example below we will pull and run
comes pre-configured with Docker. In the example below we will pull and run
an the official Docker image for nginx\*, an open source reverse proxy server.
#. First, pull a container image from Docker Hub using the