Editorial changes in Hyper-v guide for grammar and formatting. (#871)

* Editorial changes for grammar and formatting.

Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <maryx.camp@intel.com>

* Closes #774 

* Added reviewer feedback.

Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <maryx.camp@intel.com>

source/get-started/virtual-machine-install/hyper-v.rst

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 ################################
 
 This page explains how to run a |CL-ATTR| :abbr:`VM (virtual machine)` on a
-a Microsoft Hyper-V\* hypervisor.
+Microsoft\* Hyper-V\* hypervisor.
 
 .. contents::
    :local:
@@ -15,41 +15,41 @@ Overview
 ********
 
 Hyper-V is a type 1 bare-metal hypervisor that runs directly on system
-hardware.
+hardware. It is available for `Windows\* server`_ and client operating systems,
+including `Windows 10`_.
 
-Hyper-V is available both on server and client Windows operating systems as
-`Hyper-V on Windows Server`_ and `Hyper-V on Windows 10`_.
+|CL| provides a virtual disk image for Hyper-V, which also includes
+a :ref:`Hyper-V specific kernel <compatible-kernels>` and drivers.
 
 Prerequisites
 *************
 
-* Enable virtualization, such as `Intel® Virtualization Technology`_
-  (Intel® VT) and `Intel® Virtualization Technology for Directed I/O`_ (Intel®
-  VT-d), on the host system from EFI/BIOS.
+* Enable virtualization on the host system from EFI/BIOS, such as:
 
-* Hyper-V installed on a capable Windows operating system. Refer to the
-  Microsoft documentation on `Install the Hyper-V role on Windows Server`_ or
-  `Install Hyper-V on Windows 10`_.
+  * `Intel® Virtualization Technology`_ (Intel® VT)
+  * `Intel® Virtualization Technology for Directed I/O`_ (Intel® VT-d)
 
-* Configure appropriate virtual networking in Hyper-V. Refer to the Microsoft
-  documentation on `Create a virtual network on Window Server`_ or `Create a
-  virtual network on Window 10`_.
+* Install Hyper-V on the appropriate Windows operating system:
+
+  * `Install the Hyper-V role on Windows Server`_
+  * `Install Hyper-V on Windows 10`_
+
+* Configure the appropriate virtual networking in Hyper-V:
+
+  * `Create a virtual network on Windows Server`_
+  * `Create a virtual network on Windows 10`_
 
 
 Download the |CL| disk image for Hyper-V
 ****************************************
 
-|CL| provide a virtual disk image for Hyper-V with |CL| pre-installed. This
-includes a |CL| :ref:`Hyper-V specific kernel <compatible-kernels>` with
-Hyper-V Linux drivers ready-to-go. Get the latest |CL| image for Microsoft*
-Hyper-V from the `downloads`_ website. The file is named
-:file:`clear-[VERSION]-hyperv.vhdx.gz`.
+#. Download the :file:`clear-[VERSION]-hyperv.vhdx.gz` for Microsoft* Hyper-V
+   from the `downloads`_ website.
 
-We also provide instructions for downloading and verifying a Clear Linux
-images. For more information, refer to :ref:`download-verify-decompress`.
+#. Verify and extract the image using these instructions:
+   :ref:`download-verify-decompress`.
 
-After extraction, the file should be named
-:file:`clear-[VERSION]-hyperv.vhdx`.
+   After extraction, the file should be named :file:`clear-[VERSION]-hyperv.vhdx`.
 
 
 Create and configure new VM
@@ -64,9 +64,8 @@ Create and configure new VM
    Figure 1: Hyper-V Manager from the Start menu
 
 
-#. Create a *New Virtual Machine* by clicking the :guilabel:`Action` menu and
-   selecting the :guilabel:`New` submenu, and selecting :guilabel:`Virtual
-   Machine...`.
+#. Create a *New Virtual Machine* by clicking the :guilabel:`Action` menu,
+   then selecting :guilabel:`New` and :guilabel:`Virtual Machine...`.
 
    .. figure:: figures/hyper-v/hyper-v-02.png
       :scale: 100%
@@ -77,54 +76,55 @@ Create and configure new VM
 #. Follow the *New Virtual Machine Wizard* to create a new virtual machine
    specifying the options below:
 
-   - **Name**: Choose name (e.g. ClearLinuxOS-VM).
+   - **Name**: Choose name (for example, ClearLinuxOS-VM)
    - **Generation**: Generation 2
    - **Startup memory**: 2048 MB or more
-   - **Connect Virtual Hard Disk**: select :guilabel:`Use an existing virtual
+   - **Connect Virtual Hard Disk**: Select :guilabel:`Use an existing virtual
      hard disk` and browse to find the :file:`clear-[VERSION]-hyperv.vhdx`
      file.
 
    After finishing the wizard, the VM will be created but not powered on.
 
-#. Go to *Virtual Machine Settings* by right-clicking the newly created |CL|
-   VM in the Hyper-V Manager and selecting :guilabel:`Settings...`
+#. Configure the VM by right-clicking it in the Hyper-V Manager and selecting
+   :guilabel:`Settings...`.
+   Figure 3 shows the Settings page after configuration selections.
 
    - Under :guilabel:`Firmware`, select the Virtual disk and click
-     :guilabel:`Move Up...` until it is at the top of the list. 
+     :guilabel:`Move Up...` until it is at the top of the list.
 
    - Under :guilabel:`Security`, uncheck the :guilabel:`Enable Secure Boot`
      checkbox.
 
    - Under :guilabel:`Processor`, consider increasing the number of virtual
-     processors assigned to the |CL| VM for performance.
+     processors assigned to the |CL| VM to improve performance.
 
    .. figure:: figures/hyper-v/hyper-v-03.png
       :scale: 100%
       :alt: |CL| VM Settings in Hyper-V Manager
 
-   Figure 3: |CL| VM Settings page after selections
+   Figure 3: |CL| VM Settings page after configuration
 
 #. Click :guilabel:`Apply` at the bottom of the VM Settings screen.
 
-#. Click :guilabel:`OK` at the bottom of the VM Setting screen.
+#. Click :guilabel:`OK` at the bottom of the VM Settings screen.
 
 
 Start the VM
 ************
 
 #. Start the |CL| VM by right-clicking the VM in Hyper-V Manager and selecting
-   :guilabel:`Start`
+   :guilabel:`Start`.
 
 #. Connect to the VM console by right-clicking the VM in Hyper-V Manager and
    selecting :guilabel:`Connect...`. A new *Virtual Machine Connection* window
-   will appear.
+   is displayed.
 
-#. After |CL| is booted, login to the console with user *root*. You will be
-   prompted to set a new password immediately. 
+#. After |CL| is booted, log in to the console with user *root*. You are
+   prompted to set a new password immediately.
 
    .. code-block:: console
 
-      > User: root   
+      > User: root
 
 |CL-ATTR| on Microsoft Hyper-V\* is ready for use.
 
@@ -135,13 +135,13 @@ Related topics
 
 
 
-.. _`Hyper-V on Windows Server`: https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/windows-server/virtualization/hyper-v/hyper-v-on-windows-server
-.. _`Hyper-V on Windows 10`: https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/virtualization/hyper-v-on-windows/index
+.. _`Windows\* Server`: https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/windows-server/virtualization/hyper-v/hyper-v-on-windows-server
+.. _`Windows 10`: https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/virtualization/hyper-v-on-windows/index
 .. _`Intel® Virtualization Technology`: http://www.intel.com/content/www/us/en/virtualization/virtualization-technology/intel-virtualization-technology.html
 .. _`Intel® Virtualization Technology for Directed I/O`: https://software.intel.com/en-us/articles/intel-virtualization-technology-for-directed-io-vt-d-enhancing-intel-platforms-for-efficient-virtualization-of-io-devices
 .. _`Install the Hyper-V role on Windows Server`: https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/windows-server/virtualization/hyper-v/get-started/install-the-hyper-v-role-on-windows-server
 .. _Install Hyper-V on Windows 10: https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/virtualization/hyper-v-on-windows/quick-start/enable-hyper-v
-.. _`Create a virtual network on Window Server`: https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/windows-server/virtualization/hyper-v/get-started/create-a-virtual-switch-for-hyper-v-virtual-machines
-.. _`Create a virtual network on Window 10`: https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/virtualization/hyper-v-on-windows/quick-start/connect-to-network
+.. _`Create a virtual network on Windows Server`: https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/windows-server/virtualization/hyper-v/get-started/create-a-virtual-switch-for-hyper-v-virtual-machines
+.. _`Create a virtual network on Windows 10`: https://docs.microsoft.com/en-us/virtualization/hyper-v-on-windows/quick-start/connect-to-network
 .. _downloads: https://clearlinux.org/downloads