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1274 Commits
Author SHA1 Message Date
MCamp859 6525cfe218 Edited text to align with other tutorials.
Added Prerequisites section.
Added sudo -s as first command and deleted sudo from other commands.
Edited text for active voice and consistency between steps.
Removed gerunds in headings.
Changed figure captions to remove gerunds and differentiate.

Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-03-29 11:48:39 -04:00
Michael Vincerra f2e73b0004 Changes instances from '%HOME' to '$HOME'; omits openssh-server bundle installation; omits cruft.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-03-28 08:12:26 -07:00
mltullis 0c5062dcbf Merge pull request #102 from Michael-Vincerra/vncstructurefix2
Flattens nested content in several sections to simplify use cases; fi…
2018-03-27 13:13:25 -07:00
Rodrigo Caballero dd60ab0102 Merge pull request #93 from MCamp859/custom-container-edits
Copy edit for grammar, formatting, and text flow.
2018-03-27 12:58:23 -06:00
Michael Vincerra 41fc6c24f7 Further flattens nested items overall. Omits use cases on mac using the built-in screen sharing. In Connect
to your VNC session, includes steps 1-2 for each use case. Makes configuration of RealVNC optional
section--instead of note.

Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-03-26 16:37:12 -07:00
Rodrigo Caballero 54dcdb5c75 Merge pull request #96 from MCamp859/netwk-bond-edits
Edited for grammar, formatting, and text flow.
2018-03-26 10:09:11 -06:00
Michael Vincerra 5e8976bfa1 Flattens nested content in several sections to simplify use cases; fixes grammatical and stylistic errors.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-03-23 14:55:14 -07:00
MCamp859 74d0af843b Added sudo -s as first command and deleted sudo from other commands.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-03-22 14:23:54 -04:00
MCamp859 a3ef3a5231 Confirmed sudo -s is first command and deleted sudo from other commands.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-03-22 11:12:14 -04:00
Michael Vincerra 4919274824 Fixes structure issues in Install a VNC Viewer App.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-03-21 12:29:05 -07:00
Michael Vincerra dbda6cbe29 Fixes structure in network.rst index file.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-03-21 11:11:07 -07:00
mltullis b392d59792 Merge pull request #82 from bktan8/vnc2
Completed VNC document.
2018-03-20 18:23:19 -07:00
Michael Vincerra b949223fcc Minor grammatical edits made to vnc2 branch.
Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra <michaelx.vincerra@intel.com>
2018-03-20 16:35:23 -07:00
MCamp859 2e8a607a34 More edits to restart concept.
Deleted gerunds from section heads.
Added period to figure caption.

Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-03-19 17:27:16 -04:00
Tom Leavitt 206ba54c33 Fix telemetry-backend rendering issue
The bulleted list for the flask apps is not rendering correctly, add a line to correct this
2018-03-19 10:54:40 -07:00
bktan8 fbfdb313ca Update vnc.rst 2018-03-15 14:38:51 -07:00
Rodrigo Caballero b12c33bee2 Merge pull request #95 from MCamp859/ipxe-install-edits
Edited for grammar, formatting, and text flow.
2018-03-15 15:16:35 -06:00
bktan8 800ef9130e Update vnc.rst 2018-03-15 13:53:45 -07:00
bktan8 86e3c85187 Update vnc.rst 2018-03-15 13:50:48 -07:00
Rodrigo Caballero 7803558d92 Merge pull request #86 from joselamego/spark
spark.rst: Add standalone-Spark use case tutorial
2018-03-15 13:41:26 -06:00
MCamp859 c89cfe05ee Removed branding * in custom-clear-container doc title.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-03-15 15:35:39 -04:00
MCamp859 1c48597bd4 Added period to 2 figure captions in ipxe-install doc.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-03-15 15:19:47 -04:00
MCamp859 ef04ca612a Updated network-bonding doc per review feedback.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-03-15 15:01:51 -04:00
MCamp859 61975f7ced Edited for grammar, formatting, and text flow.
Modified topic title. Replaced # with sudo.
Removed ini role, added bash role to user entry code blocks.
Removed duplicated external link.
Edited text for active voice and consistency between steps.

Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-03-14 11:07:15 -04:00
MCamp859 bb5aa9d49a Edited for grammar, formatting, and text flow.
Modified topic title, heading text, and heading levels.
Deleted prompt character. Replaced # with sudo.
Corrected links to external webpages.
Edited text for active voice and consistency between steps.

Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-03-12 16:53:55 -07:00
MCamp859 4a1a81875b Edited for grammar, formatting, and text flow.
Deleted prompt character. Replaced # with sudo.
Assigned bash role to code blocks with user entries.
Edited text for active voice and consistency between steps.

Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-03-12 18:06:53 -04:00
MCamp859 e64e400141 Edited for grammar, formatting, and text flow.
Deleted prompt character. Replaced # with sudo.
Assigned bash role to code blocks with user entries.
Edited text for active voice and consistency between steps.

Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-03-08 15:06:30 -05:00
Rodrigo Caballero 31900f3c34 Merge pull request #80 from kevincwells/mixer-doc-update
Update Mixer documentation
2018-03-07 16:13:35 -06:00
Kevin C. Wells 5f9bed0e27 Fix missing word and minor formatting issue 2018-03-07 13:22:36 -08:00
Rodrigo Caballero fdbd1dafc5 Fix technical inaccuracies introduced by rewording.
Additionally, all the unnecessary sudo commands have been removed.

Signed-off-by: Rodrigo Caballero <rodrigo.caballero.abraham@intel.com>
2018-03-07 10:45:07 -06:00
Ecouzens eb26ba09c6 copy edit and language update
Signed-off-by: Ecouzens <evan.couzens@intel.com>
2018-03-06 13:47:17 -08:00
Ecouzens c2902ec1a5 copy edit and language cleanup
Signed-off-by: Ecouzens <evan.couzens@intel.com>
2018-03-06 13:33:21 -08:00
Ecouzens 888cf2ff27 Merge branch 'mixer-doc-update' of https://github.com/kevincwells/clear-linux-documentation into kevincwells-mixer-doc-update 2018-03-06 09:31:26 -08:00
Rodrigo Caballero 73f21faff8 Rewrite guide to improve clarity, flow, markup, and consistency.
The rewrite includes:
Explicit commands for important options.
Use of lists to improve the clarity of the configuration variables content.
Removal of command prompts to enable DBT.
Consistent use of terminology.
Use of concrete examples to improve the clarity of the commands.
Improved content flow and navigation with linked workflow overviews.
Added cross-references.
Removed ambiguous relative pronouns and punctuation.
Removed passive voice whenever possible.
Changed verbs to present tense for consistency and style guide compliance.
Optimized headings for search engines.

Signed-off-by: Rodrigo Caballero <rodrigo.caballero.abraham@intel.com>
2018-03-06 11:21:14 -06:00
MCamp859 510b40fc3d Completed requested edits.
Added |CLOSIA|, removed incorrect option roles, added envvar role,
removed XML language in code blocks, and minor text edits.

Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-03-05 14:30:09 -05:00
Ecouzens fe5ec7b7de Merge branch 'mixer-doc-update' of https://github.com/kevincwells/clear-linux-documentation into kevincwells-mixer-doc-update 2018-03-05 11:29:00 -08:00
Kevin C. Wells 19995d3c2c Update mixer documentation for new commands
This patch updates the documentation to comply with all of the new changes
Mixer 4.0 introduces:

- Many changes to the bundle lifecycle. It introduces
the concept of "local" and "upstream" bundles, and several new commands
to work with them.

- The new, native implementations of swupd-server
and the bundle-chroot-builder tool, both still in experimental
mode behind optional flags.

- New default values for mixer init

Signed-off-by: Kevin C. Wells <kevin.c.wells@intel.com>
2018-03-02 16:31:23 -08:00
MCamp859 15417d6999 Deleted prompt in examples.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-03-01 15:47:19 -05:00
MCamp859 62265b552c Removed prompt character.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-03-01 15:33:11 -05:00
Eric Adams 314ac4215a Update smb.rst
I added "already" to make that sentence a bit more clear.
2018-02-28 11:33:25 -08:00
Kristi Rifenbark 78ef0ebabc smb.rst: Suggested grammar and rewording edits
Scrubbed file for grammar and clarity.

Signed-off-by: Kristi Rifenbark <kristi@buzzcollectivemarketing.com>
2018-02-28 10:29:28 -08:00
MCamp859 f817a58066 Edited for grammar, format, and text flow.
Signed-off-by: MCamp859 <mary.camp@ptiglobal.net>
2018-02-28 11:38:19 -05:00
Rodrigo Caballero 7c2269ac7c Merge pull request #92 from ECouzens/collab-guide-update
copy edit and language update
2018-02-27 14:22:20 -06:00
Rodrigo Caballero 0572dc2c66 Merge pull request #88 from gvancuts/simply-checksum-checking
Simplify the image checksum validation instructions
2018-02-27 14:19:13 -06:00
Ecouzens 24ab40b3b4 copy edit and language update
Signed-off-by: Ecouzens <evan.couzens@intel.com>
2018-02-27 09:35:26 -08:00
Brett T. Warden d824d9e446 aws-web: remove mention of -l parameter from text
Changing explanatory text to match the given example command.

Signed-off-by: Brett T. Warden <brett.t.warden@intel.com>
2018-02-26 16:56:16 -08:00
Auke Kok 6ff9bf4db1 Fix ssh username passing comment.
Using `root@` and then `-l clear` is ambiguous.
2018-02-26 13:48:49 -08:00
Rodrigo Caballero 7603ee3e9f Change all caps to bold for emphasis. 2018-02-26 12:34:28 -06:00
Rodrigo Caballero a73905e6d3 Merge pull request #61 from clearlinux/vmware-player-improved2
Vmware player improved2
2018-02-26 12:30:50 -06:00
bktan8 ccdc438bc8 Update vmw-player-preconf.rst 2018-02-26 10:26:45 -08:00