From e489014707889f8ecd8e7ac81ba6b847405e82cb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: DougTW Date: Thu, 27 Jun 2019 13:55:55 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Changed ister.rst for trademarks, branding, and editorial issues. (#573) * Minor editorial revision to test multiple commits on one file. Signed-off-by: douglasm * Minor editorial revisions completes my revisions to this file. Signed-off-by: douglasm --- source/clear-linux/guides/tooling/ister.rst | 18 +++++++++--------- 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) diff --git a/source/clear-linux/guides/tooling/ister.rst b/source/clear-linux/guides/tooling/ister.rst index be2df62b..bc8e399e 100644 --- a/source/clear-linux/guides/tooling/ister.rst +++ b/source/clear-linux/guides/tooling/ister.rst @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ ister.py image builder ###################### -The `ister.py tool`_ is a template based installer used by |CL-ATTR| to produce +The `ister.py tool`_ is a template-based installer used by |CL-ATTR| to produce images for each release. The same ister tool is available for use in |CL| to create custom images based on an upstream image. @@ -14,21 +14,21 @@ create custom images based on an upstream image. Description *********** -|CL| is a rolling release and produces on average 10 releases per week using the +|CL| is a rolling release and produces an average of 10 releases per week using the ister tool. With each release we produce multiple :ref:`image types for different environments ` and use cases such as installers, Hyper-V, KVM, or VMWare. -Each image has a JSON configuration file used by ister to generate the image. -These JSON configuration files describe the image type, partitions, version, -and which bundles will be preinstalled by default with the image. For each image -type we produce, the corresponding JSON configuration file for the image is also +Each image has a JSON configuration file that is used by ister to generate the +image. These JSON configuration files describe the image type, partitions, version, +and bundles that will be preinstalled by default with the image. For each image +type we produce, the corresponding JSON configuration file for the image also is published. The :ref:`mixer` tool also uses ister to build images for your custom mix. Like upstream images, a JSON configuration file is defined for the image, which ister uses to generate the image. Refer to the :ref:`mixer` guide -for instruction on using ister to build an image for a custom mix. +for instructions on using ister to build an image for a custom mix. Examples ******** @@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ Recreate an upstream image ========================== The published configuration files for upstream images may be used to recreate an -image, for example when you want to: +image. Here are some examples: * Use an older version of |CL| and the image is no longer available (only after March 2017). @@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ configuration file: :file:`/clear/config/image`. For example: ``https://cdn.download.clearlinux.org/releases/15700/clear/config/image/`` -#. Download “PostNonChroot” script (if applicable). +#. Download the “PostNonChroot” script (if applicable). The JSON configuration file for the image may have an accompanying “PostNonChroot” script that is executed at the end of the image creation