From d67da866d106932de5325be39b7f3bcf045202a6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: puneetse <22071208+puneetse@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Mon, 10 Sep 2018 16:13:33 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Implement some changes requested by @mvincerx

---
 source/clear-linux/concepts/security.rst | 11 +++++------
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/source/clear-linux/concepts/security.rst b/source/clear-linux/concepts/security.rst
index cf7162c7..75fa4cac 100644
--- a/source/clear-linux/concepts/security.rst
+++ b/source/clear-linux/concepts/security.rst
@@ -1,12 +1,11 @@
 .. _security:
 
-Clear Linux\* Security 
+Clear Linux\* OS Security 
 **********************
 
-Clear Linux\*, as it is distributed and maintained upstream, aims to make 
-systemic and layered security conscious decisions, which are both
-performant and practical. This security philosophy is rooted within
-the project's codebase and operating culture.
+Clear Linux\* aims to make systemic and layered security-conscious decisions,
+that are both performant and practical. This security philosophy is rooted 
+within the project's codebase and operating culture.
 
 
 .. contents:: :local:
@@ -130,7 +129,7 @@ Compiled with secure options
 ----------------------------
 
 While |CL| packages are optimized for performance on 
-Intel Architecture, security conscious kernel and compiler options are 
+Intel® Architecture, security conscious kernel and compiler options are 
 sensibly taken advantage of. Below are some examples: