Implement some feedback from @nesiusra

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@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ This includes security-centered innovations adopted in the Linux upstream.
Automated Effective Updating
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The |CL| upstream is updated at lightning pace, releasing full
The |CL| content is updated at lightning pace, releasing full
new versions of |CL| with incremental updates multiple times a day!
This `rolling release model`_ allows |CL| to consume the latest security
@@ -69,13 +69,10 @@ are published by :abbr:`NIST` in a National Vulnerability Database
\ |NVD|\ and at \ |MITRE|\ .
|CL| takes a proactive and measured approach to addressing known
|CL| employs a proactive and measured approach to addressing known
and fixable Common Vulnerabilities and Exposures (CVEs) disclosures.
|CL| packages are scanned against CVEs at least daily, and
software patched in accordance to the fix. This scanning is automated
with an open source tool - `cve-check-tool`_ - and any outstanding
vulnerabilities monitored appropriately.
Packages are automatically scanned against CVEs at least daily, and
security updates and patches are deployed as soon as they are available.
These combined practices minimize the amount of
time |CL| systems are exposed to unnecessary security risk.
@@ -158,7 +155,7 @@ sensibly taken advantage of. Below are some examples:
Security in System Design
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Common and simple, yet effective, techniques are used throughout the
Simple, yet effective, techniques are used throughout the
|CL| system design to defend against common attack vectors and enable
good security hygiene. Below are are some examples: