From 7781b64552aa8fcdbfa5ae9f0c8e1f17469a6c5f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Leona Date: Mon, 3 Oct 2016 11:33:39 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Fix typos and grammar edit on vm-virtualbox Signed-off-by: Leona --- source/vm-virtualbox.rst | 26 +++++++++++++------------- 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-) diff --git a/source/vm-virtualbox.rst b/source/vm-virtualbox.rst index f3117727..e2696e8b 100644 --- a/source/vm-virtualbox.rst +++ b/source/vm-virtualbox.rst @@ -59,17 +59,17 @@ Create a virtual machine in VirtualBox Run your new VM =============== -Clear Linux OS for Intel Architecture support VirtualBox kernel modules used +Clear Linux OS for Intel Architecture supports VirtualBox kernel modules used by the Linux kernel 4.4 :abbr:`LTS (Long Term Support)` (*kernel-lts bundle*). -This kernel was selected due to Clear Linux OS main kernel -(*kernel-native bundle*) keeps up-to-date with Linux Kernel upstream and -some times VirtualBox kernel modules doesn't fit in early days of a new -kernel release. +This kernel was selected because Clear Linux OS's main kernel +(``kernel-native``) bundle keeps up-to-date with the upstream Linux kernel, +and sometimes VirtualBox kernel modules aren't compatible with pre-kernel +releases. -In the first boot Clear Linux will ask for a login user, type **root** and +In the first boot, Clear Linux will ask for a login user, type **root** and then the system will ask you for a new password. -To install the VirtualBox kernel modules you should follow these steps: +To install the VirtualBox kernel modules, here are the steps: #. Install the bundle that supports VirtualBox modules:: @@ -101,9 +101,9 @@ To install the VirtualBox kernel modules you should follow these steps: Install Guest Additions ----------------------- -The kernel modules are shipped by *kernel-lts* bundle, but you need to install -the *user* Linux Guest Additions. To install the VirtualBox Guest Additions -you should follow these steps: +The kernel modules are shipped with the ``kernel-lts`` bundle; however, +you'll need to install the *user* Linux Guest Additions. To install the +VirtualBox Guest Additions, follow these steps: #. Insert Guest Additions CD image using *Devices* menu @@ -115,12 +115,12 @@ you should follow these steps: # reboot -#. (*Optional*) To use Clear Linux graphical user interface please do:: +#. (*Optional*) To use Clear Linux graphical user interface, add the GUI bundle:: # swupd bundle-add os-utils-gui - once the *os-ultils-gui* bundle is installed you can start - graphical user interface with:: + once the ``os-utils-gui`` bundle is installed, start your graphical + user interface with:: # startx