From 739e4cc9cd0368ab8f73c2022101d6db5f16583c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Leona Date: Mon, 4 Jan 2016 11:45:10 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] small formatting corrections on swupdate sections --- source/swupdate_about_sw_update.rst | 10 +++++----- source/swupdate_how_to_run_the_updater.rst | 4 ++-- 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/source/swupdate_about_sw_update.rst b/source/swupdate_about_sw_update.rst index e9aa24f4..1181c77f 100644 --- a/source/swupdate_about_sw_update.rst +++ b/source/swupdate_about_sw_update.rst @@ -4,8 +4,8 @@ About software update The traditional way =================== -Traditional Linux-based operating systems are often an amalgation of -several hundred, if not thousands, of open source projects. To make them +Traditional Linux-based operating systems are often a mix of several +hundred, if not thousands, of open source projects. To make them manageable, most distributions use the concept of "packages" to configure and compile source code into binaries for installation. @@ -19,9 +19,9 @@ each package individually or as a set, using tools such as ``yum`` and The Clear way ============= -Clear Linux OS for Intel® Architecture has a few notable features that -distinguish it from standard OSes: bundles, versioning, updating, and update -speed. +Clear Linux OS for Intel® Architecture does things a little differently. +Following here are a few notable features that distinguish it from +standard OSes: bundles, versioning, updating, and update speed. Bundles ------- diff --git a/source/swupdate_how_to_run_the_updater.rst b/source/swupdate_how_to_run_the_updater.rst index 750ced91..14c0a6ee 100644 --- a/source/swupdate_how_to_run_the_updater.rst +++ b/source/swupdate_how_to_run_the_updater.rst @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ How to run the updater -############################################################ +###################### This section describes how to manually trigger the software update code in Clear Linux* OS for Intel® Architecture. @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ Prerequisites ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ - System is up and running a Clear Linux OS for Intel - Architecture official build 300 or later. + Architecture official build, 300 or later. - Device is on a well-connected network.