From 53171a42ecb8a1d9c3be49c46d6603512073b47e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kristal Dale <kristal.dale@intel.com>
Date: Thu, 4 Oct 2018 16:02:12 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] - Update tutorial title to indicate what it will teach -
 Simplify introduction - Update CL name substitutions - Update section title
 "Additional resources" to use standard "Related topics" - Replace "Install
 and configure Clear Linux Host.." title with "Prerequisites". Update section
 to be more consistent with other prereq sections e.g. tutorial assumption and
 instruction to update CL. - Correct section title delineation with correct
 depth

Signed-off-by: Kristal Dale <kristal.dale@intel.com>
---
 .../machine-learning/machine-learning.rst     | 47 +++++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 27 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)

diff --git a/source/clear-linux/tutorials/machine-learning/machine-learning.rst b/source/clear-linux/tutorials/machine-learning/machine-learning.rst
index a1aff29e..97271e34 100644
--- a/source/clear-linux/tutorials/machine-learning/machine-learning.rst
+++ b/source/clear-linux/tutorials/machine-learning/machine-learning.rst
@@ -1,22 +1,29 @@
 .. _machine-learning:
 
-Machine learning tutorial
-#########################
+TensorFlow\* machine learning on |CL-ATTR|
+##########################################
 
-This tutorial guides you through installing and using a Jupyter\* notebook to
-set up and execute a TensorFlow\* machine learning example using the MNIST
-data for handwriting recognition using the |CLOSIA|. The initial steps will
-have you set up a Jupyter kernel and run a notebook on a bare-metal |CL|
-system.
+This tutorial will demonstrate the installation and execusion of a TensorFlow\* 
+machine learning example on |CL-ATTR|. It uses a Jupyter\* Notebook and MNIST
+data for handwriting recognition. 
 
-Install and configure a Clear Linux Host OS on bare metal
-=========================================================
+The initial steps will have you set up a Jupyter kernel and run a Notebook 
+on a bare-metal |CL| system.
 
-First, follow our instructions to install
-:ref:`Clear Linux on bare metal<bare-metal-install>`.
+Prerequisites
+*************
 
-Once the bare metal installation and initial configuration are complete, add
-the following two bundles to your system:
+This tutorial assumes you have installed |CL| on your host system. For detailed 
+instructions on installing |CL| on a bare metal system, follow the 
+:ref:`bare metal installation tutorial<bare-metal-install>`.
+
+Before you install any new packages, update |CL| with the following command:
+
+.. code-block:: bash
+
+   sudo swupd update
+
+Once your system is updated, add the following bundles to your system:
 
 * `machine-learning-web-ui`: This bundle contains the Jupyter application.
 
@@ -33,7 +40,7 @@ directory:
    sudo swupd bundle-add machine-learning-basic
 
 Set up a Jupyter notebook
-=========================
+*************************
 
 With all required packages and libraries installed, set up the file structure
 for the Jupyter Notebook.
@@ -82,7 +89,7 @@ The files needed are:
 * `t10k-labels-idx1-ubyte.gz`_: Test set labels (4542 bytes)
 
 Run the Jupyter machine learning example code
-=============================================
+*********************************************
 
 With |CL|, Jupyter, and TensorFlow installed and configured, we can
 run the example code.
@@ -184,18 +191,18 @@ run the example code.
 
       Figure 8: The system's accuracy for the entire data set.
 
-For more in-depth and detailed information on the model used and the
-mathematics it entails, visit the TensorFlow tutorials
+For more in-depth information on the model used and the mathematics it entails, 
+visit the TensorFlow tutorials
 `TensorFlow MNIST beginners demo`_ and `TensorFlow MNIST pros demo`_.
 
 **Congratulations!**
 
-You have successfully installed a Jupyter kernel on |CL|. Furthermore, you
+You have successfully installed a Jupyter kernel on |CL|. In addition, you
 trained a neural network to successfully predict the values contained in a
 data set of hand-written number images.
 
-Additional resources
-====================
+Related topics
+**************
 
 * `MNIST Database website`_
 * `TensorFlow MNIST beginners demo`_