diff --git a/source/clear-linux/concepts/security.rst b/source/clear-linux/concepts/security.rst index 6a6979b1..9bfe90ff 100644 --- a/source/clear-linux/concepts/security.rst +++ b/source/clear-linux/concepts/security.rst @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ Clear Linux\* OS Security ********************** -Clear Linux\* aims to make systemic and layered security-conscious decisions +Clear Linux\* OS aims to make systemic and layered security-conscious decisions that are both performant and practical. This security philosophy is rooted within the project's codebase and operating culture. @@ -167,10 +167,10 @@ good security hygiene. Below are some examples: |CL|, you will be asked to set your own password immediately. - Simple password schemes, which are known to be easily compromised, - cannot be set in |CL|. + cannot be set in |CL|. - A password blacklist, to avoid system passwords being set to - passwords which have been compromised in the past. + passwords which have been compromised in the past. * `Tallow`_, a lightweight service which monitors and blocks suspicious SSH login patterns, is installed with the :command:`openssh-server` bundle.