From fb217bc9240a22e941c33d451d5783190b051a91 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Michael Vincerra Date: Wed, 14 Nov 2018 18:19:06 -0800 Subject: [PATCH 1/3] Fixes syntax errors and corrects |CL| substitutions. Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra --- .../bare-metal-install-beta-intro.rst | 17 ++++++++--------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) diff --git a/source/clear-linux/get-started/bare-metal-install-beta-intro/bare-metal-install-beta-intro.rst b/source/clear-linux/get-started/bare-metal-install-beta-intro/bare-metal-install-beta-intro.rst index 8069704b..fffcc293 100644 --- a/source/clear-linux/get-started/bare-metal-install-beta-intro/bare-metal-install-beta-intro.rst +++ b/source/clear-linux/get-started/bare-metal-install-beta-intro/bare-metal-install-beta-intro.rst @@ -66,22 +66,21 @@ Launch the installer #. After the |CL| live desktop image boots, select the :guilabel:`Activities` menu in the upper left. -#. Select the |CL| icon, **Install |CL|**, shown in Figure 1. +#. Select the icon, :guilabel:`Install Clear Linux OS`, shown in Figure 1. .. figure:: figures/bare-metal-install-beta-intro-1.png - :scale: 50 % - :alt: Install |CL| icon + :scale: 50 % + :alt: Install Clear Linux OS icon - Figure 1: Install |CL| icon + Figure 1: Install Clear Linux OS icon -#. After selecting the |CL| icon, the installer is launched, as shown in - Figure 2. +#. Upon selecting the icon, the installer is launched, as shown in Figure 2. .. figure:: figures/bare-metal-install-beta-intro-2.png - :scale: 50 % - :alt: Install Clear Linux icon + :scale: 50 % + :alt: Install Clear Linux icon - Figure 2: Install Clear Linux icon + Figure 2: Install Clear Linux icon #. Continue to :ref:`bare-metal-install-beta` From 56b197c2760abeb8b73afeab4c4308031d747af0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Michael Vincerra Date: Wed, 14 Nov 2018 18:21:52 -0800 Subject: [PATCH 2/3] Corrects syntax and formatting errors impacting rendering. Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra --- .../bare-metal-install-beta.rst | 20 +++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) diff --git a/source/clear-linux/get-started/bare-metal-install-beta/bare-metal-install-beta.rst b/source/clear-linux/get-started/bare-metal-install-beta/bare-metal-install-beta.rst index c48b76fd..a1bf9f1d 100644 --- a/source/clear-linux/get-started/bare-metal-install-beta/bare-metal-install-beta.rst +++ b/source/clear-linux/get-started/bare-metal-install-beta/bare-metal-install-beta.rst @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ Minimum installation requirements ********************************* To fulfill minimum installation requirements, complete -``Required options``. All other menu items are optional. +:guilabel:`Required options`. All other menu items are optional. .. note:: @@ -55,9 +55,9 @@ Navigation .. figure:: figures/bare-metal-install-beta-1.png :scale: 100 % - :alt: |CL| Installer main menu + :alt: Clear Linux OS Installer main menu - Figure 1: :guilabel:`|CL| Installer main menu` + Figure 1: :guilabel:`Clear Linux OS Installer main menu` .. _required-options-installation: @@ -157,8 +157,8 @@ Configure Media Two options for partitioning appear. #. Select :guilabel:`Auto Partition` to accept the default configuration, or - :guilabel:`Add Partition` to add partitions manually. See - instructions below. + :guilabel:`Add Partition` to add partitions manually. See instructions + below. .. figure:: figures/bare-metal-install-beta-5.png :scale: 100 % @@ -239,7 +239,7 @@ requirements shown in Table 1: #. In the Configure Media menu, select :guilabel:`Add Partition`. .. note:: To change an existing partition, navigate to the partition, - and select :guilabel:`Enter` + and select :guilabel:`Enter`. boot partition -------------- @@ -628,11 +628,11 @@ Select a kernel option. By default, the latest kernel release is selected. You may choose a different option, such as kernel with Long Term Support (LTS). To do so, select :guilabel:`Tab` until the kernel option is highlighted. - .. figure:: figures/bare-metal-install-beta-22.png - :scale: 100 % - :alt: Kernel selection +.. figure:: figures/bare-metal-install-beta-22.png + :scale: 100 % + :alt: Kernel selection - Figure 22: :guilabel:`Kernel selection` + Figure 22: :guilabel:`Kernel selection` #. Select :kbd:`Spacebar` to select the desired option. From 61311d70de3f14cd48ecd6b9e0e11edf952d7471 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Michael Vincerra Date: Wed, 14 Nov 2018 18:28:19 -0800 Subject: [PATCH 3/3] Revises caption in Figure 2. Signed-off-by: Michael Vincerra --- .../bare-metal-install-beta-intro.rst | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/source/clear-linux/get-started/bare-metal-install-beta-intro/bare-metal-install-beta-intro.rst b/source/clear-linux/get-started/bare-metal-install-beta-intro/bare-metal-install-beta-intro.rst index fffcc293..06c41e0f 100644 --- a/source/clear-linux/get-started/bare-metal-install-beta-intro/bare-metal-install-beta-intro.rst +++ b/source/clear-linux/get-started/bare-metal-install-beta-intro/bare-metal-install-beta-intro.rst @@ -78,9 +78,9 @@ Launch the installer .. figure:: figures/bare-metal-install-beta-intro-2.png :scale: 50 % - :alt: Install Clear Linux icon + :alt: Clear Linux OS Installer - Figure 2: Install Clear Linux icon + Figure 2: Clear Linux OS Installer #. Continue to :ref:`bare-metal-install-beta`