diff --git a/source/clear-linux/get-started/bare-metal-install-beta/bare-metal-install-beta.rst b/source/clear-linux/get-started/bare-metal-install-beta/bare-metal-install-beta.rst index 05c1ad90..c1410511 100644 --- a/source/clear-linux/get-started/bare-metal-install-beta/bare-metal-install-beta.rst +++ b/source/clear-linux/get-started/bare-metal-install-beta/bare-metal-install-beta.rst @@ -87,24 +87,26 @@ Launch the installer Minimum installation requirements ********************************* -To fulfill minimum installation requirements, complete -:guilabel:`Required options`. All other menu items are optional. +To fulfill minimum installation requirements, complete the +:guilabel:`Required options`. :guilabel:`Advanced options` are optional. Additional user help is described below. .. note:: - * In the Main menu, the :kbd:`Install` button is highlighted - **only after** you complete :ref:`required-options-installation`. + * The :kbd:`Install` button is only highlighted **after** you complete the + :ref:`required-options-installation`, and after you enter all required + values in submenus of :ref:`required-options-installation` and + :ref:`advanced-options-installation`. * You must choose whether or not to participate in :ref:`telemetrics` - before you can :ref:`finish-cl-installation`. + before you can finish installation. * You may wish to :ref:`test-network-settings` before you - :ref:`configure-network-interfaces`. Assure that a ``Success`` message is received. + :ref:`configure-network-interfaces`. Assure that a ``Success`` message is received before installation. -Main menu +Main Menu ********* -In the |CL| Installer main menu, two tabs appear: +In the |CL| Installer Main Menu, two tabs appear: :guilabel:`[R] Required options` and :guilabel:`[A] Advanced options`. Navigate between tabs using the arrow keys or these shortcut keys: @@ -124,13 +126,13 @@ Navigation * Select :kbd:`Cancel` or :kbd:`Esc` to cancel your choice. - The |CL| Installer main menu appears as shown in Figure 3. + The |CL| Installer Main Menu appears as shown in Figure 3. .. figure:: figures/bare-metal-install-beta-3.png :scale: 100 % - :alt: Clear Linux OS Installer main menu + :alt: Clear Linux OS Installer Main Menu - Figure 3: :guilabel:`Clear Linux OS Installer main menu` + Figure 3: :guilabel:`Clear Linux OS Installer Main Menu` .. _required-options-installation: @@ -140,7 +142,7 @@ Required options Choose Timezone =============== -#. From the main menu, select :guilabel:`Choose Timezone`. +#. From the Main Menu, select :guilabel:`Choose Timezone`. #. Select :kbd:`Enter` to continue. @@ -154,7 +156,7 @@ Choose Timezone .. note:: Select :guilabel:`Cancel` to restore the previously defined value and - return to the main menu. + return to the Main Menu. .. figure:: figures/bare-metal-install-beta-4.png :scale: 100 % @@ -165,7 +167,7 @@ Choose Timezone Choose Language =============== -#. From the main menu, select :guilabel:`Choose Language`. +#. From the Main Menu, select :guilabel:`Choose Language`. #. Select :kbd:`Enter`. @@ -177,7 +179,7 @@ Choose Language .. note:: - Select :guilabel:`Cancel` to restore the previously defined value and return to the main menu. + Select :guilabel:`Cancel` to restore the previously defined value and return to the Main Menu. .. figure:: figures/bare-metal-install-beta-5.png :scale: 100 % @@ -189,7 +191,7 @@ Choose Language Configure the Keyboard ====================== -#. From the main menu, select :guilabel:`Configure the Keyboard`. +#. From the Main Menu, select :guilabel:`Configure the Keyboard`. #. Select :kbd:`Enter`. @@ -204,7 +206,7 @@ Configure the Keyboard .. note:: - Select :guilabel:`Cancel` to restore the previously defined value and return to the main menu. + Select :guilabel:`Cancel` to restore the previously defined value and return to the Main Menu. .. figure:: figures/bare-metal-install-beta-6.png :scale: 100 % @@ -215,7 +217,7 @@ Configure the Keyboard Configure Media =============== -#. From the main menu, select :guilabel:`Configure Media`. +#. From the Main Menu, select :guilabel:`Configure Media`. .. note:: @@ -223,16 +225,6 @@ Configure Media #. Navigate to the desired media until highlighted. - .. TODO: Add another screenshot showing contextual menu. - -#. Select :kbd:`Enter` or :kbd:`Spacebar` to select it. - - Two options for partitioning appear. - -#. Select :guilabel:`Auto Partition` to accept the default configuration, or - :guilabel:`Add Partition` to add partitions manually. See instructions - below. - .. figure:: figures/bare-metal-install-beta-7.png :scale: 100 % :alt: Configure Media menu @@ -248,13 +240,20 @@ Configure Media * Select :guilabel:`Rescan` to show media connected to the host machine. +#. Select :kbd:`Enter` or :kbd:`Spacebar` to select it. + + Two options for partitioning appear. + +#. Select :guilabel:`Auto Partition` to accept the default configuration, or + :guilabel:`Add Partition` to add partitions manually. See instructions + below. + #. Select :kbd:`Enter` to :kbd:`Confirm`. -Choose one partitioning option below ------------------------------------- +#. Choose one partitioning option and continue below: -* :ref:`auto-partition` -* :ref:`add-partition` + * :ref:`auto-partition` + * :ref:`add-partition` .. _auto-partition: @@ -278,7 +277,6 @@ Auto partition will configure the media to meet the minimum requirements. Figure 8: :guilabel:`Auto Partition` - #. You may skip to the :ref:`telemetry-tui` section below. .. _add-partition: @@ -406,9 +404,9 @@ Telemetry To fulfill the :guilabel:`Required options`, choose whether or not to participate in `telemetry`_. :ref:`telemetrics` is a |CL| feature that reports failures and crashes to the |CL| development team for improvements. -For more detailed information, see our :ref:`telemetry-about` page. +For more detailed information, visit our :ref:`telemetry-about` page. -#. In the main menu, navigate to :guilabel:`Telemetry` and select +#. In the Main Menu, navigate to :guilabel:`Telemetry` and select :kbd:`Enter`. #. Select :kbd:`Tab` to highlight your choice. @@ -424,10 +422,14 @@ For more detailed information, see our :ref:`telemetry-about` page. Skip to finish installation =========================== -After selecting values for all :guilabel:`Required options`, you may skip directly to :ref:`finish-cl-installation` +After selecting values for all :guilabel:`Required options`, you may skip +directly to :ref:`finish-cl-installation` -If you wish to configure network interfaces or proxy settings, -or add bundles, or add/manage users, continue to the next section. +In the Main Menu, select the :guilabel:`Advanced options` if you wish to +configure network interfaces or proxy settings, add bundles, add/manage +users, and more. Continue with the next section. + +.. _advanced-options-installation: Advanced Options **************** @@ -550,7 +552,7 @@ Optional: :ref:`Skip to finish installation `. Bundle Selection ================ -#. On the Advanced menu, select :guilabel:`Bundle selection` +#. On the Advanced menu, select :guilabel:`Bundle Selection` #. Navigate to the desired bundle using :kbd:`Tab` or :kbd:`Up/Down` arrows. @@ -559,9 +561,9 @@ Bundle Selection .. figure:: figures/bare-metal-install-beta-18.png :scale: 100 % - :alt: Bundle selection + :alt: Bundle Selection - Figure 18: :guilabel:`Bundle selection` + Figure 18: :guilabel:`Bundle Selection` #. Select :kbd:`Confirm` or :kbd:`Cancel`. @@ -664,9 +666,9 @@ Optional: :ref:`Skip to finish installation `. Kernel Command Line =================== -For more advanced users, |CL| provides the ability to add, or remove, kernel +For advanced users, |CL| provides the ability to add or remove kernel arguments. If you want to append a new argument, enter the argument here. -This argument will be used every time you install a new kernel or update a +This argument will be used every time you install or update a new kernel. #. In Advanced Options, select :guilabel:`Tab` to highlight @@ -716,7 +718,7 @@ Optional: :ref:`Skip to finish installation `. Swupd Mirror ============ -If you have your own custom mirror of |CL|, you may want to add that URL. +If you have your own custom mirror of |CL|, you can add its URL. #. In Advanced Options, select :guilabel:`Swupd Mirror`.